the stranger things
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Watch Where You're Going!
Johnny B Goode
~Siblings~
🔥FireWing🔥
night whale 2
I will critique you designs!^^
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WarriorWolf395 
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29.04.2020
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WarriorWolf395[OP]
29.04.2020 15:46
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I love it! great job an the anatomy. But i would suggest you make it clear where the tail is. Because I don't know. I love the ears, horns and wings
Ok so you could definitely work on your color schemes. And you could also try making a new base for the ocs. Because having the same base is OK, but you need to invent another if you wanted to add wings or something else.
I love your style! You could try making them a bit bigger tho. Like just expand the size before posting, because that would give more detail. The colors could use a bit of work but otherwise great job!
I think your designs are great! ^^ They are beautiful and the colors are great too!
Amazing. Your designs are great, and they look good too! The lineart is good, and the colors schemes work perfectly with the oc!
Your designs are great! The pattern could be a bit more complicated, but simple works well too! The designs are just so great! ^^
I can't even. That is like your first design and it is beautiful and good colors!
The design is great, and I love the color scheme! But you could have made the cloak a bit smaller to see the rest of the beauty! ^^
Yeah,i agree with the cloak bit, but her backstory is that she is an assassin and a thief, so she doesn't necessarily want people to see her. Thank you tho!!!^^
Yeah i know but she is so pretty and i kinda wanna see her without her cloak! Like what the colors are, does she have fluff? That stuff
here this is deer he is the only one with a ref so he is the one i chose
I think you need better colors, and the actual art could be cleaner too but other wise good
This OC's names is Faith Shiota. She was homeschooled by her Japanese mother and English father for her entire life, so she doesn't really have any friends and her only family (on her mother's side) lives in Japan. Her father has no family left.
Her soul is an equal mix of bravery and kindness, which allows her to release small shockwaves at will. She also has the ability to manipulate and influence emotions: even to the extent of putting people to sleep.
Her clothes are always scruffy and dirty due to her using what little money she had (given to by drunk father to buy beer for him so she usually has a little left over) to buy her three-year-old sister Aiko clothes and food.
She has raised this child, shielding her from her father (he is abusive and blames Aiko for his wife's death because she died giving birth, so he turned to alcohol and took his anger out on his two daughters.
The reason she hasn't left was due to the fact she'd have no where to go if she did. She has no cell phone (neither does her father) and there's no hotels in the area where she lives. She doesn't want to keep Aiko in the cold and let her grow up homeless, so she just says in her father's home.
Her father won't let her leave as he basically wants her to be his slave, and at the time this started she was seventeen. She would've left a long time ago if not for Aiko. She also only takes his hits because he is way stronger than her and if she fights back he will just go after her sister.
As for physical appearance: She has strawberry blonde hair with light brown eyes. Due to lack of sunlight, she has pale skin, too. Her hair is long due to how she's not allowed to go to the hairdressers, and she has a small and weak frame due to being underweight.
She has multiple scars along her back from shoulder to waist - her worse being always hidden by her hair. It's a large burn scar, which goes from her eyebrow down to her mid-cheek. She's quite self-conscious about it and hides it with a large, almost anime-like fringe.
As for personality: She's a kind soul, and always puts her friends and sister before her. She'll always stand up for herself, and she'll protect her sister at any cost. However, she has many flaws. She doesn't trust easily, and has no kind of regard for her own safety at times. She also has quite a terrible temper when something really gets on her nerves and will blow up at said thing.
Any more details, just ask ^^
I apologise for the long post
Ok so i meant the art but ok. I LOVE THE BACKSTORY and basically it's great!
nah I mean dammit because i completely misinterpreted the point of this point
