-Don't reply to this comment chain- This will take me a long time, I'm sorry if you're not patient! I'll go as fast as I can!

The pastel colors are lovely! The black heart clashes with the light orange one, but this could be that art is subjective and I think it looks weird? I feel like you can see her emotion, but at the same time you can't? That could be what you're going for though! Here's the things you may need to fix: I feel like the face is off, and the head outline is too thick. Try practicing outlines, colors, and style! Along with some teenie anatomy! Overall, lovely!!

Actually ima add this to my fix list, so I can show you how to do some head shapes if you'd like? Only if you'd like!

There isn't much wrong with this! The anatomy of his face seems fine to me, but here's some tips I'd use for myself: Bigger eyes (Not extremely big!) To have more expression, the outline would be darker then the colors for him, and some shading! But you already do all of those things, so I can't fix it much, you're really good!! Overall, Stunning art!

I will type one big thing on both, let me look at them for a min!

I love the details, they're phenomenal! The fact you used those colors and they looked good to me, shows a lot! (Since I'm VERY picky on palettes) It has the right amount of emotion, good line art, and cute characters in it! I do suggest trying to use different palettes? (which is honestly something I need to do too) I love this and you did well! The anatomy I bow to you I need to follow you I can't fix the second one. Nothing to me,, is broken

I see you used purple outline, so instead of using black use another dark purple? But if you don't want to, try shading using dark purple? (NO PAINT ROLLERS I SWEAR ON GOD-) The character looks nice, and the anatomy seems fine to me! The head seems wonky, but that's really about it! Hope this helps in some way, if you aren't satisfied try and send more/different art

I lose the blue shading! How you used light blue! I love her expression, too! Tye lineart is smooth and she's cute!! I don't like the black shading, and it would've looked nice with a background, so I'm excited to see it!! Please continue to work on it soon!!! :D

That stich character looks like Kasey Golden's

I'm too lazy to type it all, but here we gooo! HIGHLIGHTER HIGH LIGHTER PLEASE TRY IT, I CAN'T LOOK AT PAINT ROLLER Now that that's out of the way, the colors you used are complementary colors so they will be pretty hard to make blend, but I do have an anim on that, also the head is a bit big (I get it, it's a 'style' but get a good grip on anatomy before you make a style, that's something I need to do more) the shading is everywhere, I have no idea where the light source is, and once again PAINT ROLLER. Overall, could use some work, but it's nice!

I CAN'T FIX SOMETHING THAT AIN'T BROKE SMH🌸 (I'll write a tip thing still, if you'd like it!)

I'm getting lazy, keep posting art I will be doing this more tomorrow after school And the day after that, depending on how much art I get

I can help with anims!! I'll make a thing on it soon