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21.05.2021
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21.05.2021 23:58
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Should i shade or
22.05.2021 00:01
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first of all, spelling -------- 2nd of all maybe start shading your art dont shade with black plssss shade with neon blue set at like 10 opacity -------------------- 3rd maybe start making stuff you arnt the best at or practice at stuff you dont draw often
22.05.2021 00:01
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ur art looks really good also just add some detail and yess dont add to much tho lol
22.05.2021 00:01
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Um lemme get this straight
22.05.2021 00:02
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No ima not roast u or get mad ima just say something real quick
22.05.2021 00:03
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I dont spell very good because my ****ing keyboard also i dont give a **** about it really I dont shade my art because im not comfy with it Also i do draw everyday- maybe u dont know me like that I dont add detail because im basic
22.05.2021 00:05
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lmao okay srry
22.05.2021 00:05
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No its fine i get this alott My art is very basicc and people like it like that idk why ruigfdcjhd Ima take ur tips and use it maybe that will give me more self cof
22.05.2021 00:01
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Ig improve the claws and add shading?? Idk it looks rlly good-
22.05.2021 00:04
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Um its a wip thats the point- I didnt do the claws all the way
22.05.2021 00:02
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i think you should put a lil shading! i recomend shading with navy blue or dark purple!
22.05.2021 00:04
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Oh? Ima try that
22.05.2021 00:05
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cant wait!!
22.05.2021 00:08
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Idk how to shade so this will be the most ugliest thing u will ever see
22.05.2021 00:14
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im sure itll look good! dont doubt yourself just yet!!
22.05.2021 00:10
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:O
22.05.2021 00:10
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This looks so cute I cant wait for it to be done >w<
22.05.2021 00:11
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Btw guess what I tricked uu
22.05.2021 00:13
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>:0
22.05.2021 00:13
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How dare youu
22.05.2021 00:14
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U know the white kitten righttt?
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22.05.2021 00:15
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The custom I made you? Or no
22.05.2021 00:15
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Yess
22.05.2021 00:16
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Yeahh
22.05.2021 00:17
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Guess whos the mother Hehahah
22.05.2021 00:33
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Meee and youuu
22.05.2021 00:42
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Bahhaha
22.05.2021 00:56
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Am I rightr
22.05.2021 00:56
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Rightt
22.05.2021 01:38
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Yee
22.05.2021 01:39
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Haahaha
22.05.2021 00:18
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The speed is off, all the slides should have medium frames and should be 90 for fast frames and 130-160 for medium speeds, I think it’s choppy, the lip sync is also quite off, it should have more shapes and variety. The lines are also really choppy and change from frame to frame, just put it the fur and body on slide, the ears on another and the eyes and mouth on another. Also, it doesn’t have much life, I would love the tail to be swung around, to make emotion. And to put the body parts on different layers to prevent making the art look rather- Starter style. I would also really like you to make the animal blink, and when it opens it’s in a different shape, for example lowering the eyes or making a light flash around the eyes when you make the animal open the eyes.
22.05.2021 00:19
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Huh
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22.05.2021 00:20
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Copy paste the layers onto new slides so you don’t have to redraw
22.05.2021 00:20
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And make the eyes and the mouth have more life
22.05.2021 00:20
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The lip sync took my awhile ig lemme redo it and ill recolor
22.05.2021 00:21
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And redo the eyes and mouth
22.05.2021 00:21
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Want examples? You seem confused.
22.05.2021 00:21
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Eh no i am bit overwhelmed with this animation I understand
22.05.2021 00:21
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You should also make it less hard to redraw the mouth, it could be time wasting
22.05.2021 00:21
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Oooo ok, I’ll just make tips for lip syncing for other people then, good luck
22.05.2021 00:22
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I already wasted time animating that i will never finish
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