constructive criticism please
by:
RisingDawn 
88
88
23.03.2018
6 comments
RisingDawn[OP]
23.03.2018 15:17
Linkhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1rKqFB8N1JvY1QMB9Yl5cHfyCq3IuRnhogZE5k1ELmF8/edit?usp=sharing
You draw eyes a little too largely. Also, don’t have the outline of the eye overlap the hair.
Oh, uh, no idea. I guess just don’t overdevelop your characters, keep correct spelling, grammar, and all that Jazz, and keep the plot entertaining.