constructive criticism please

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by: RisingDawn

23.03.2018

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RisingDawn[OP]

23.03.2018 15:17

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rKqFB8N1JvY1QMB9Yl5cHfyCq3IuRnhogZE5k1ELmF8/edit?usp=sharing

DopazTopaz

23.03.2018 15:17

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You draw eyes a little too largely. Also, don’t have the outline of the eye overlap the hair.

RisingDawn[OP]

23.03.2018 15:18

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ack it was about my story so far lmao but thanks

DopazTopaz

23.03.2018 15:38

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Oh, uh, no idea. I guess just don’t overdevelop your characters, keep correct spelling, grammar, and all that Jazz, and keep the plot entertaining.

RisingDawn[OP]

23.03.2018 15:39

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w heeze thanks DT

DopazTopaz

23.03.2018 15:50

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No problem, and good luck.