Detective: Episode 4
6 comments
AsherBee[OP]
05.12.2021 23:37
LinkDetective Episode 4! Sorry that this does not have that much action, but the story needs talking to move on the plot. I’m a little disappointed in myself for not finding a way to add more action. And if you don’t know what is happening at the end, the evidence dude stole the badge thing (I really need to put more effort into these)
AsherBee[OP]
05.12.2021 23:37
LinkEpisode 3
RollerCoaster-LOLOL
06.12.2021 12:48
Linknonono this is fine. a good story has exposition because then it's just fighting and fighting and you get nowhere in the story. this is good. maybe in the next you could make more of the fight that just started.
AsherBee[OP]
06.12.2021 22:40
LinkThank you! That is what I'm planning to do. Can't wait to animate it ^^
As long as you make the most of it you don't need to feel obligated to do so. Personally this was nice!