Me and Pinea2023 ONLY
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Grape-Wolf
16.04.2018 23:59
Linkw0w
MissGore[OP]
16.04.2018 23:59
LinkxD =3
Btw, I’m not judging, but your way to young to be doing that. In a way, it could be considered slightly sexting, in my opinion, maybe. And that’s illegal. And even if it’s not legally that, you could have trouble getting in to college if teachers saw it and others. I stopped reading pretty early, I don’t even WANNA know what else was said
Rape stories are awful storytelling anyways. It’s the definition of a cop out. If you don’t absolutely need to include rape in a story to invoke the same effect, DONT USE IT.
Especially with how awful your writing probably is, you don’t have the tact to pull it off in the way that she needed to make it not a total joke of a story.