i'll critique ur art ! ^_^
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Yellowmocha 
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17.12.2021
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Yellowmocha[OP]
17.12.2021 02:48
Linki will regret posting this later ahaha
anyway ya
pretty self explanatory uh
gonna treat this as if u drew it an hour ago
7/10
the colours are pretty washed out and the shading is pretty simple
the anatomy could be improved upon as well
for the colours i'd reccomend making things brighter [ e.g. shines on the blood in the bg ]
for the shading try and pick a specific place of where the light is
it takes time and practice to learn how to shade but one of the important aspects of it is looking at images of real life objects [ or just real life objects ] and seeing how light is cast over
[ small note ; lines can make things look concave depending on the perspective which is what u don't want happening ]
for the anatomy look at references ^_^ there are lots of free resources floating on the internet
i use this video for anatomy !
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EIkbX7HuUCI
apart from that it looks pretty good , i love the bg and design of the character ! ππ
gonna critique both in the one
7/10
putting it slightly lower cuz even though it looks really good it's pretty simplistic
the colours are very pretty but the lineart is very sketch like probably because it IS the sketch
there's no shading and there's no bg for the first one
for the lineart i'd just reccomend doing a very simple sketch and then doing lineart over that
for the shading [ as i've said to everyone ] i'd reccomend looking at real life objects and noting on how the light is cast over it
for backgrounds i don;t really have a critique -- just practice and practice and eventually you'll get better at it !
9/10
ur art ππ
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
ur anatomy is so AMAZING ACK -
no critiques for it
moving onto the lineart i can tell that it's a coloured sketch
from ur other art i can tell ur competent at lineart
there's also no shading so [ as i've been telling others ] i'd reccomend looking at real life objects and noting on how the light is cast over it
REFERENCES , PEOPLE, REFERENCES !!!
apart from that i LUVV ITTT AAAAA β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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7.5/10
i like the design and i can tell what ur tryna go for but there r a few improvements that can be made ~
first thing is the colours / shading
i can tell u used a coloured shading but it just seems a bit too dark ? i use a deep blue , almost like a navy when i shade usually but i change it depending on the environment / colouring of the character
it also seems pretty messy , when i shade i put the opacity to 0.1 [ but keep in mind the opacity naturally goes lower than what u set it at with flipanim ]
never shade or highlight wight greyscale , it makes the colours looks muddy unless you're going for that look
for the lighting on the hair i'd reccomend a light yellow [ yellow is the best colour for lighting most of the time ]
the hand reaching out would also be bigger because of perspective [ it's closer to the camera so naturally it would be bigger ]
the anatomy is pretty good and i would tell u to flip the canvas but u can't do that with fa sadly
the head just seems off ,, i think it's the angle
the bg is pretty simple , i think it could be drawn with a lower opacity too but overall very good ^_^
i'll critique the first one
8/10
I LOVE UR ART STYLE SO MUCH AAA
it's so cute and simplistic and chibi ack -
for the perspective of the first one --
when i do perspective i draw up a grid
i just draw a line for the horizon and pick a specific point and draw lines from that , then draw horizontal lines
i think it'd help cuz the perspective is kinda wonky
the colours are VERY PRETTY !!!!!
there's no shading which is probably the effect u were going or but i think very minimal light shading would make it look better
as ive been saying with everyone i'd reccomend looking at real life objects and noting on how the light and shadow is cast over it
IT HELPS A LOT !!! it's one of the things that helped me with shading
i also feel like the lineart should be coloured but that's just a personal opinion ^_^
i feel like there could also be a little bit of clean up - ? just some colours and line overlap aha
overall VERY GOOD !!! i luv it :D
9/10
ok first ofF HOLY **** THOSE COLOURS ARE PRETTY
i love the use of the blue contrasting with the pink <3
my only critique[s] is that the arms are a bit confusing ?? it took me a while to figure out how the right arm was drawn and i'm still kinda confused
also maybe try to add a bit more lighting ? a light pink over the top of everything would make it look better
the way i do lighting is i choose a colour , set the opacity to 0.1 and dot around a specific area to make an airbrush circle thing
then i enlarge it and place it in the spot i want it to be
apart from that ABSOLUTELY STUNNING !!!!!!!!
9/10 OK FIRST OFF I AM ON MY KNEES PROPOSING TO UR ART STYLE IT IS SO ****ING GORGEOUS
my only critique is lighting ok bye ππ¨
jk lmfao
but seriously i would make it 10/10 but everyene has space to improve β€οΈβ€οΈ
your anatomy is stunning , the colours are beautiful , shading gorgeous , AND UR EXPRESSIONS DON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON UR EXPRESSIONS
EVERYTHING IS JUST SO AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW MUCH MORE AWESOME U BECOME !!!!! now come here and get a hug from mama flower <:] πππππππππππππππ
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NO YOU GOTTA POINT THO
my lighting is like
poo poo
like i do shading and then I'm just like "yeah the stuff that ain't shading is lighting ig."
oh go d that's a lot of comments -
this might take a while so please be patient ^^
I drew this icon for a friend https://ibb.co/jyVW61W I absolutely hated the sketch (https://ibb.co/k46WgRD), but I think it turned out pretty nice, would love some critique mainly focused on the perspective, although please do go ham on me i need da improvement words uwu
9/10 man i don't think i can really help lmfap
my only critique a tiny little bit of clean-up and [ imo ] colouring the lineart to help with the lighting and shading , apart from that i am
genuinely speechless at how beautiful it is
eeeee thanks! I'll be sure to colour the lineart for the rest of the icons I owe them then! thankskss :D
[ btw when i say coloured lineart i mean how the lineart on this is slightly yellow and purple in some areas to put emphasis on the shading -- ]
8.5/10
man i ****en love ur art style so much
the shading is stunning , the colours compliment each other so well , and the lineart and anatomy and clothes and just MMMM YESSS IT'S ALL SO GOOODDDDDDD
i would say " bg π‘ " but i understand why it's pretty simple and i'm sure it would be even more amazing with a bg β€οΈβ€οΈ
my only critique is that a touch of lighting would make it better but apart from that it's really good aaa
I COULDNT DO A BG BC WHEN I WAS DONE W PIERRE IF I MOVED HIM THE SHIT WOULD CRASH AND FA COULDNT REALLY HANDLE MORE SO YA
but anyways omg ty
If you can get to me, cool. If not, you're good.
My excuse is I haven't been drawing too much lately and this is basically something I pulled out of my ass to make sure I wasn't as bad as I thought
7/10
i like the colours , they really compliment the simplistic style :D
i just think there could be a little big of clean up , especially with the shading
the shading here is also pretty simplistic and [ imo ] could be improved upon
i'd reccomend looking at real life objects and noting on how the light and shadow is cast over it
the bg is also really simplistic
i'd also reccomend this tutorial for drawing clothes ^_^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U57e8qDR6gc
a lot of these things will probably be improved with time and practice <:]
6/10
it's pretty simplistic and very much beginner like but at this point i think you should just be practicing and practicing and practicing
the colours actually go together very well
the lighting could be improved upon but i think at this stage baby steps are probably best ^_^
sorry for such a short critique ack -