ya y *coughS* 1. I suggest trying to do a bit better linework. this will the drawing clearer. 2 the color pallete is kind of bold,so i suggest using pastels sometimes. 3. the tail is a no-no. it's just a squiggly line, and i suggest adding more details and adding color to the tail. 4. the hair needs volume. 5.for the clothes, i suggest you add volume and wrinkles for a realistic anime-like affect or whatever you're going for. 6. the head is WAY too big for the body, and so i suggest making the head smaller. yeah that's it lmao besides my critique, Your art is very good!

oof on the #1, i meant to say "this will make the drawing clearer"