Critique me and my art!
11 comments
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:40
LinkHmmmm
(cute doodle btw)
-Bun-Bun-[OP]
22.06.2020 18:40
Linkty!
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:41
LinkI love the way you draw your characters, and the mystique is nice. I do, however, believe that you could work on anatomy. I've noticed that a lot of your character's heads face downwards, at an odd angle, but that can easily be fixed! Just practice anatomy overall, especially snouts on side view- it'll work wonders to your art!
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:42
LinkShading techniques! i'm not experienced with this, but i can give you my two cents. Hold on, let me pull up an example-
-Bun-Bun-[OP]
22.06.2020 18:43
LinkInconspicuously looks up what mystique means...
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:43
Linkthis will be our example ->
The shading. Pick a light source. Say it's on the left. Then a lot of the shading will be on the R I G H T, not on both sides. Highlights will be on the left. In the attached anim, on one of the arms, you shaded both sides which wouldn't make sense. DON'T shade with black!!
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:43
Link(laughs inaudibly)
Ice-Wolf
22.06.2020 18:44
LinkShade with low opacity maroon, purple, blue, etc.
-Bun-Bun-[OP]
22.06.2020 18:45
LinkI'm just remembering why I did what I did and getting mad because I didn't do what I wanted to xD