Here's my admition

(My rap. I'm going to use for the entrance exam to the school)

I'll use flowey

Flowey vs shy rose, what are the results? A little cry baby whining for a boat? A boat that will take her far away from her The one known as shyrose, hey, she's not a blur She just wants to live a peaceful life with nothing of despair And every animator knows your NOT the perfect pair Bring you two together and she beats your little butt And when she meets you, she will crush you like a nut!!

My first rap ???????

Can I try out too?

Ya!! JOIN INNN

Ok here I go :D Flowey? More like whining little brat if you ask me. We're glad that you've gone from this site's community. You'd better change your mind if you ever think that we Would support a spoiled punk who calls herself 'flowey'. And that thing you call 'art'? It's funny, I've never seen Anything resembling art, far or in between The sad anims on your account, so bad that I could cry So pack your bags, you little tween, go and say goodbye.

What is my grade?

Mind if I grade yours, meg?

Np!

Okay so, first off the rhyming in the first two lines doesn't exist. Second, all the metaphors and similes just make you seem desperate for a rhyme and like you're not living up to your creative potential. Also, the flow is a bit off, so you should check the number of syllables in each line. C+

Sorry flowey but it's time to go like you did a long ago but don't come back before you get smacked you want another chance but we said no walk out the door just go i don't care anymore just live it low other animators fighting for hours while you were being sour and sour oh why we all said when you came back from the dead but this time you better stay down your grave you were mean to shy and everybody why