just put your art here :D
by:
AnimationBro 
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1616
19.05.2019
91 comments
AnimationBro[OP]
19.05.2019 16:48
Linki will join too
bluePROdraws
19.05.2019 16:50
Linkthe background doesnt really suit the drawing ;w;
SweetLiitlePhyco
19.05.2019 16:52
Linkone of the eyes is to close to one side of the head and small, the shading is only darkening, i dont see any shine except in the eye
PleaseUsernameHere
19.05.2019 17:08
LinkEyes are a bit uneven, and I feel the placement of which areas are shaded are a bit random... also, I agree with bluePROdraws with the background not exactly fitting the drawing itself too much.. :l
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no
too much blood, the shadow is out of place and the shading looks weird
need practice
Oki ;-; thank you i'll try a bit harder, that was an first attempt anyway. always room for improvement!
the green part of the eyes just look out of place and it doesnt even have a mouth
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MarshDog, it looks very messy, the shading on the bag just looks out of place, the bag is floating, the ears are really awkwardly put on, it's hard to see where the arms are, the dot on the dog's face doesn't look at all like a nose, and overall, the idea of a sleeping bag full of cum is really gross.
the tongue doesnt even touch the food i guess
and the transistion is not that good
the clothes and the characters doesnt fit in
the clothes lineart is drastically different from the characters wearing it
Bruh the art style is post to be wonky a bit cause I like the drastic cartoony looking style
the shading is too messy for me
and the shadow is just little too big
Here u go
Before u say it's too messy, that's like. The purposeful aesthetic. Just keep it in mind
the crown doest fit in
where the forehead?
where the shade on the hair
but its T H I C C
im-
yes
ok so here are the answers to your questions
1. probably covered by the frikin hair
2. does not compute
I N D E E D ? ? ?
i only criticized the first piece
the scribble ruined the art to be honest
the line is messy
their is some part that is not colored
idk if this is intentional but its kinda out of proportion
... the problem that i only see is that it doesnt have any shade i guess
the lineart is messy
their is somepart that have no color which annoy me a little
and the proportion is kinda wacky
