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11.07.2020
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11.07.2020 22:08
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Soooooo, you're staying at a friend's(Johnny) house, when you both hear some creaking so Johnny decides to go discover like an idiot. It's been 20 minutes and you think it's his brother, David pranking you so you go to David to confront him.
11.07.2020 22:10
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"Did you do anything ti make like- creaking sounds ir something?" Fox asked.
11.07.2020 22:10
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Thing not ti-))
11.07.2020 22:14
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"No. Why?" David shrugs.
11.07.2020 22:15
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"Fuuu- Okay.." Fox went outside.
11.07.2020 22:16
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He follows him. "Why? You didn't answer my question."
11.07.2020 22:17
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"We heard a creaking sound, and he went outside to find it. He's been gone for about twenty minutes."
11.07.2020 22:18
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"You're joking. Right?"
11.07.2020 22:19
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"You know I don't make jokes." Fox said, walking around.
11.07.2020 22:23
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"Okay, where did he go if you were out here?"
11.07.2020 22:23
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"He walked towards the forest."
11.07.2020 22:26
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"Nope! Don't go in there."
11.07.2020 22:27
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"Well, my friends in there, so.."
11.07.2020 22:28
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"How do you know? Don't you watch horror movies?"
11.07.2020 22:29
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"I watch a lot of horror movies. Good thing I don't care about my life." Fox walked into he forest.
11.07.2020 22:31
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"You really shouldn't be doing this." He said, trying to follow him.
11.07.2020 22:32
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"Yeah, well,"
11.07.2020 22:34
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"Just forget about this. We can call the police and they'll solve it. Be sensible at this."
11.07.2020 22:35
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"I'm not leving my friend. My only friend, at that."
11.07.2020 22:36
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"Again, call the police, make new friends, he'll be found, problem solved."
11.07.2020 22:37
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"I listen too true crime podcasts. He'll be dead at that point. I also know I'll be killed, but I don't care."
11.07.2020 22:38
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"He's probably dead now. Killers work quick, you know? "
11.07.2020 22:39
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"Yeah, I do. Or, they rape and tirture their victims, giving us time." Fox walked deeper into the forest.
11.07.2020 22:44
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"He'll just be broken by then, giving us less time to get him working in time to escape and we'll then be the next victims, dying together and right before I die, I'll get to tell you I told you so."
11.07.2020 22:45
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"Fine," Fix called the police, told them everythung, and walked deeper intot he forest.
11.07.2020 22:45
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Fox))
11.07.2020 22:46
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"Where are you going? You don't even know where you're going or where you are! You technically asking to be brutally murdered!"
11.07.2020 22:47
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"Yeah, okay."
11.07.2020 22:48
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"You're being dumb right now. "
11.07.2020 22:49
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"I am an idiot."
11.07.2020 22:52
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"That's quite obvi-" He trips over what looks like a branch. He gets up and shrieks.
11.07.2020 22:53
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Fox turned around.
11.07.2020 22:54
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"It's an arm!"
11.07.2020 22:55
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"Holy-"
11.07.2020 22:58
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"Shit, let's go. Right now." He says, walking back the way they came.
11.07.2020 22:58
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Fox looked torn.
11.07.2020 23:03
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"Come on unless you wanna die."
11.07.2020 23:04
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Fox coughed. "I do, actually, really want to die."
11.07.2020 23:06
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"You know what? Fine, let's continue looking for my shitty brother." He says, walking back in the opposite direction.
11.07.2020 23:07
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"Okay." Fox followed.
11.07.2020 23:11
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He walks in silence, looking behind and to the sides of him frequently.
11.07.2020 23:31
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Fox sighed. "This is pointless.."
11.07.2020 23:36
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"This was your idea. I said we can go."
11.07.2020 23:39
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"We should just leave."
11.07.2020 23:41
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"Fine." He turns around and starts walking before he stops, frozen in his tracks. He looks at Fox in confusion. "Y-you don't hear him?"
12.07.2020 18:20
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"No?"
12.07.2020 18:26
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"You don't hear him screaming? Begging for help?" He says, walking in a random direction, towards where he supposedly heard his brother.
12.07.2020 18:28
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"No, what are you doing?" Fox followed.
12.07.2020 18:30
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"Looking for my brother."
12.07.2020 18:35
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"He's not saying anything-"
12.07.2020 18:40
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He stops when he sees a seemingly normal cabin, smoke coming from the chimney. "He's in here. He said he is."
12.07.2020 18:44
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"What-?"
12.07.2020 18:48
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He walks up to the house and looks in the windows before going to the door.
12.07.2020 18:48
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Fox follows.
12.07.2020 18:53
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He opens the door silently before walking in quietly.
12.07.2020 18:55
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Fox sighed.
12.07.2020 18:59
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He stops only to look around and continues in a different direction.
12.07.2020 19:00
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Fox followed.
12.07.2020 19:05
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He stops at a door. "He said right here."
12.07.2020 19:13
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"What-?"
12.07.2020 19:19
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"He said he's right here."
12.07.2020 19:20
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"Okay,"
12.07.2020 19:23
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Before Danny could even open the door, the door opened for him to reveal stairs leading into a dark space.
12.07.2020 19:27
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"Nope!"
12.07.2020 19:35
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"No what? If he's really your friend, you'd come with me!"
12.07.2020 19:37
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"Says the one who didn't want to find him in the first place-"
12.07.2020 19:43
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"Shut up and just follow me."
12.07.2020 19:48
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"Fine,"
12.07.2020 19:55
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He walks slowly and steadily down the stairs.
12.07.2020 20:04
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Fox went up the stairs, wishing they could go faster.
12.07.2020 20:22
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When he reaches the bottom, he turns to Fox. "You got a flashlight?"
12.07.2020 20:25
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"Yeah," Fox pulled out his phone.
12.07.2020 20:34
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"Cool." He walks forward before stopping.
12.07.2020 20:35
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Fox almost ran into David when he stopped.
12.07.2020 20:38
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"Turn around. Right now."
12.07.2020 20:40
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"Yes sir," Fox turned and ran down the stairs.
12.07.2020 20:42
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He followed him, eventually surpassing him.
12.07.2020 20:43
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Fox coughed again. "Shit-"
12.07.2020 20:45
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"****!" He slows down to sling Fox around his shoulder and continued running.
12.07.2020 20:47
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"I-I'll be fine.. Just go!"
12.07.2020 20:54
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"No you won't!"
12.07.2020 20:57
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"Yeah, well.."
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13.07.2020 00:53
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"Just be quiet!"
13.07.2020 00:56
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"Fine,"
13.07.2020 00:59
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He runs out of the house only to be stopped by a lumberjack. "Are you okay?" the lumberjack asked.
13.07.2020 01:00
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Fox didn't respond, trying so hard not to cough.
13.07.2020 01:03
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"We're coming from um...that side of the woods."
13.07.2020 01:04
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Fox nodded.
13.07.2020 01:06
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"I just saw you come out of my cabin there. I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to call the police and you both have to stay in there until they arrive."
13.07.2020 01:07
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"Wh-what?" Fox coughed the second he said that.
13.07.2020 01:10
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"Come on, put the boy down and let's go." The lumberjack said, pulling Fox off of David's shoulder, only to have David tighten his grip on Fox. "No sir. We are on our way home. We just got lost and thought someone would have a phone for us to phone home."
13.07.2020 01:11
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"I can get down.." Fox whispered. It was unusual for him to be quiet.
13.07.2020 01:14
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"Best listen to your friend." The lumberjack said, smiling mysteriously. David puts Fox down gently, giving a tiny scoff after.
13.07.2020 01:15
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Fox seemed scared, which, again, was rare.
13.07.2020 01:18
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The lumberjack walks towards the cabin, occasionally looking back at the boys.
13.07.2020 01:18
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Fox leaned slightly against David, shaking a little.
13.07.2020 01:22
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He rubs Fox's back. "Listen to me alright, the next time he looks back, we're making a run for it. I'll carry you." He whispers in Fox's ear.
13.07.2020 01:22
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"H-he reminds me o-of someone.."
13.07.2020 01:23
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"Who?"
13.07.2020 01:24
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"F-father.." It was known Fox's parents were abusive.
13.07.2020 01:26
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"Your dad?"
13.07.2020 01:27
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He nodded.
13.07.2020 01:44
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"Wait, your dad lives in the woods as a lumberjack?"
13.07.2020 01:45
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"N-no.. He just.."
13.07.2020 01:50
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"He just what?"
13.07.2020 01:52
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"The way he grabbed me, the way he talks, his demeanor.."
13.07.2020 01:54
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"What Fox? Just say it."
13.07.2020 01:55
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"He reminds me of my dad.."
13.07.2020 01:55
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"Does your dad look like that?"
13.07.2020 01:56
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"No,"
13.07.2020 01:59
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"Where's your dad been?"
13.07.2020 02:00
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"Drunk. Really drunk. At bars. Not home."
13.07.2020 02:00
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"Is it possible he could be him, just, you know, changed?"
13.07.2020 02:01
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"Yeah.."
13.07.2020 02:02
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The lumberjack looked back once again and David picks up Fox and runs in the direction back to his house.
13.07.2020 02:04
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Fox melted into David's arms.
13.07.2020 02:11
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The lumberjack double looks before following them. "Hey! Get back here!"
13.07.2020 02:12
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Fox whimpers quietly, flashbacks running through his head.
13.07.2020 02:19
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He comes to the entrance of the woods before police raise their guns. "Freeze!" They yell. David stops in his tracks.
13.07.2020 02:21
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"No no no," Fox mumbles, trying to somehow get closer to David.
13.07.2020 02:23
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"No no, we're the ones who called about Johnny- What the ****?" He says, staring right at Johnny. The police put their guns down.
13.07.2020 02:24
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Fox started to cry, though he was trying not too.
13.07.2020 02:47
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"There they are! I thought you guys ran off." Johnny said. David rubs Fox's back consolingly. "Thought we ran off? You ran off and WE went to go look for you!"
13.07.2020 02:49
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Fox didn't realize the police were even there. It was the memories of his parents. He vividly remembered the feeling of a belt against his back, and sobbed harder.
13.07.2020 02:52
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Johnny goes to pull Fox into a hug before David beats him to it. "What's wrong Fox?"
13.07.2020 02:53
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"I... He... He'll be back... He always comes home.." Fox sobbed.
13.07.2020 02:57
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"You can stay with me."
13.07.2020 02:58
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"N-no.." Foxx looked up and saw the police. He froze and wiped his face, taking a step back.
13.07.2020 03:00
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"What's wrong Fox?" Johnny asked, looking at Fox with concern.
13.07.2020 03:00
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Fox**))
13.07.2020 03:00
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"I-I... Don't like police.."
13.07.2020 03:03
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"Let's go into the house." Johnny says, reaching for his hand before David stops him. "You've done enough." David says sternly.
13.07.2020 03:05
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Fox sniffles, glancing up at the police. "A-are we in trouble-?" Fear filled his green eyes.
13.07.2020 03:22
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"No buddy." David answers.
13.07.2020 03:25
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"Oh.."
13.07.2020 03:35
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"Who's that behind you guys?" Johnny asks, pointing to the lumberjack behind them.
13.07.2020 03:39
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Fox Tenses, and doesn't turn, knowing who it.
13.07.2020 03:45
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The police seem to notice him and immediately go to arrest him.
13.07.2020 03:50
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Fox was shaking slightly.
13.07.2020 03:53
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"Let's go in the house." David said, walking towards the house.
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