i'll rate/opinion on your ocs
by:
inksaforever 
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10.03.2021
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inksaforever[OP]
10.03.2021 02:10
Linkfull title: i'll rate and/or opinion on your characters (original characters/ocs) backstory/backstories and i'll give you any advice i can to help you improve it.
inksaforever[OP]
10.03.2021 02:10
Link(provide refs of your ocs if you can, so i can have a better vision and look.)
inksaforever[OP]
10.03.2021 02:17
Linki said backstories, please provide backstories, i'm only giving opinions and ratings on them. i only want refs so i can imagine them in the situation and see if the backstory matches with whatever they hell their bio is or something.
They’re not even my OCs, I just refined their appearance with the aid of a bad doodle to reference.
8.2/10, maybe add some sort of sense into it? because it is quite odd how children can escape an orphanage that quick. unless you have explanation for that. pretty great backstory though.
They have a BaTIM backstory and then a canon backstory. Canon backstory is that they lived on the streets of NY before Gracie took them in and now they all live in a mansion with a ton of other people. It’s like a sitcom.
Just two. But the only properly written one is the one in the comments.
im about to get off so ill see the rating in the morning but my profile is my oc named star who is energetic and has slight issues with being alone.
now i see you wanted backstorys so here: Star at age 5 was pushed off a cliff by her unknown brother and was trapped for a week until a cat stumbled upon her and asked if she needed help star said yes quite fast and went back to her family when up the cliff, her brother was no where to be found 4 years later she was lost and was found by the cat again then they stumbled upon a cave, and thats basically all the important details and im tired ;-;
7/10, i've never heard a backstory like this so it's unique, i'll give it that. keep working on it though! it is still a little rusty, but with more work put into it, it should be a great backstory.
thanks, ill try and make a better version soon but I am sleepy plus thats just a small summery :P
just read my reply to Leaf I don't wanna make my profile super long again from Recent Comments
8/10, don't have any sort of tips, just keep working on it.
also, how does a shark mate with a human lmaoooo