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Cerelia the Loyal Oracle
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10.07.2021
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10.07.2021 13:54
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She sat with an empty book in her hands, reading from it as if words were written on it, keeping a steady pace and speaking incoherently, or maybe in a language we couldn't understand. Bandages wrapped her back and eyes, seeming clean, and refreshed daily. She'd cleaved her wings from her back early in her days of becoming an oracle, having no need for the honor or pride other archaes bare their wings to show, proving her commitment to her god. Her malnourished body is apart of the cave she dwells within, her legs and tail becoming stiff and calcified, sprouts having taken hold in the cracks of the stone. She is adamant she will be rewarded for her persistence and loyalty to Sepitae, and her body will be restored upon his resurrection.
10.07.2021 13:55
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I could not decide how much detail I wanted
10.07.2021 13:57
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Noooo what happened to the shading it was supposed to be darker this is a tragedy
10.07.2021 13:55
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I love the lighting, this is incredible. As is the writing.
10.07.2021 15:14
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hOLY ShIT YOU ARE A SKILLED WRITER
10.07.2021 15:15
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'Her malnourished body is apart of the cave she dwells within, her legs and tail becoming stiff and calcified,,,,,,,,She is adamant, she will be rewarded for her persistence and loyalty to Sepitae, and her body will be restored upon his resurrection ' those sentences caught me off guard. you have talent.
10.07.2021 15:16
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tell me more abt Sepitae, if you could. Is it allegorical for jebus, like Aslan from Narnia?
10.07.2021 15:19
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I noticed the whole 'when he resurrects thing'. Ofc OC resurrection itself doesn't have anything to do with jebus crust, but I was wondering if that was the intention also I love the worldbuilding and religion-building for the fiction. It makes it so real.
10.07.2021 15:46
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next J.R.R. Tolkien/rowling here bro :eyes:
10.07.2021 18:52
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I'm so happy you asked!!! Sepitae is the brother to Aulorn, and together they created the Archaes! I do actually include interactions with gods in my writing.. which is funny because I'm atheist. But it provides explanations for things like the Archae's powers. Sepitae was killed during the fight with his brother, Aulorn. And his skeleton can still be found. Sepitae was most favored by the archaes due to being the God of life and light, causing the fight with Aulorn. The archaes still praise Sepitae despite his death, while Aulorn is often looked at like one would Hades. Despite his actions being pretty justified because Sepitae was a dick to him
10.07.2021 18:53
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It is. Unintentionally somewhat similar to MLP's Luna and Celestia.
10.07.2021 19:24
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this is the coolest lore I've ever heard
10.07.2021 19:25
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also I don't know whether or not to hate Sepitae, and love Aulorn, or just hate the Archaes for disliking Aulorn despite his reasonable grudge against Sepitae
10.07.2021 20:42
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It's not the Archae's fault, the history is skewed, much like textbooks.
10.07.2021 17:48
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give me your writing skills
28.07.2021 15:50
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:0 Three moons this is good.... H o w
28.07.2021 15:57
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Is this wof?
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