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12.11.2020

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-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:09

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-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:12

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So uh- I wanna know what you guys thought about my book and the first chapter- It's because I wanna know if you guys enjoyed it so I can feel more happier making them ^^ Anyways, If you didn't read it yet, let me sponsor it:

-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:12

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h. -------> ---- do not comment on this chain or :gun: ----

stylus

12.11.2020 14:13

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so your making a book right?

stylus

12.11.2020 14:14

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later ya mind helping me in my own book ....and ya- i have started it

-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:14

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yeah- but on FA--

-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:14

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Sure, maybe I can help not too good at it tho-

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stylus

12.11.2020 14:15

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ok! thx its called "labatoris"

Nightmarionne

12.11.2020 14:18

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I personally loved it! (Not just because of the pretty heavy gore) I loved the atmosphere! It was just good overall in my opinion. But some criticism- maybe try waiting a little bit longer till the actual action? Maybe? I dunno I just thought you could maybe have shown a little bit more of the storyline? That's just my opinion though.

-distortedxparasee-[OP]

12.11.2020 14:20

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Alright! Thanks for the criticism, I'll be pretty much working on chapter 2 today and try to follow this as much as possible.

Nightmarionne

12.11.2020 14:21

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Np!