prettygirl11330 Critique #1
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clipclop
10.11.2017 20:24
Linkcritique Teal
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clipclop
10.11.2017 20:24
Linkhere
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:26
LinkOkay, I'll try, even though I love her character! >w< (Btw, it's ThisIsMaya)
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:26
LinkOkay, I'll try, even though I love her character! >w< (Btw, it's ThisIsMaya)
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:26
LinkOkay, I'll try, even though I love her character! >w< (Btw, it's ThisIsMaya)
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:26
LinkOkay, I'll try, even though I love her character! >w< (Btw, it's ThisIsMaya)
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:26
LinkOkay, I'll try, even though I love her character! >w< (Btw, it's ThisIsMaya)
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FriendlyCritique[OP]
10.11.2017 20:27
Linkwhat is going on with these double comments
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clipclop
10.11.2017 20:28
Linkidek XD
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clipclop
10.11.2017 20:28
Linkidek XD
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clipclop
10.11.2017 20:28
Linkfuc
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Get the pastels going!
I'd change the crown to a tiara, because not much ppl use these. Crowns are (kind of) overrated.
Give eyebrows, to show more expression. Do shading, too!
The hearts on the cheeks are optional but it makes your OC more original
Thank you!