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The Lost Children: old concept
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26.11.2021 09:31
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some old thing from 2019 that i abandoned but decided to touch back onto the old concept and redesign it little (from characters to story). lemme show yall the old concept first and then i'll show yall the new and improved one. please note that The Lost Children was from my edgy phrase back in 2019 FA.
26.11.2021 09:39
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The Lost Children: Old story. An old schoolhouse dated back in Limocity, a Victorian era inspired timeline. 4 children, who were around 10 - 13, were great friends. But one day, Layla (the girl between the other girl and boy) discovered a big black spot on the right side of the schoolhouse's building. She touched it was grabbed by something, Layla screamed for her friends. The boy, Dave (changed his name in new story to Divias), and the other girl, Day, rushed to Layla's aid. Dave was the faster one who got there first and tried helping Layla but his leg was grabbed by some sort of hand and dragged in as he tripped over it. Layla was soon dragged in as well. Layla finally got there but as she saw a glimpse of Layla's hand disappearing, she tried running but was grabbed and it was sucking her blood dry. She grabbed a stcik and started hitting the thing. It let go of her causing her to only be half infected. This black spot grew and caused many missing persons. Day was trapped in the schoolhouse and only hel
26.11.2021 09:40
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helped those who got trapped there in the future times to escape. Day was discovered by Layla and infected her fully causing her to become hostile towards the people she was trying to save. One of the survivors burned down the schoolhouse, causing everyone's souls to be freed.
26.11.2021 09:50
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The Lost Children: New story. It all started in an orphanage full of children in New Zealma's olden times, the Victorian-inspired era, Villerian era. Layla was the oldest child in the orphanage; she was 14 at the time of her disappearance. Layla experienced weird dreams of demonic creatures and powerful godly creatures. After a few weeks of this, she wondered into a forest nearby the orphanage and went missing for about a month. Her two friends, Davias and Day, were worried about her until she came back. However, Day, noticed something strange in Layla's behaviour. Small white veins were shown on her face but brushed it off as it could be wielding taking form. But she was still weirded out by her behaviour as it was strange, she wasn't her happy old self anymore. Her iris started to change, it was becoming black. One day, she took Divias to the forest with her one day, went missing for another week but came back with no sign of Divias. She said that they got lost and Divias and her were separated.
26.11.2021 09:55
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Over the course of a few months, Layla would take other kids to the forest and go missing. This time, she asked Day to go with her. Day being curious, she agreed to go but not having as much trust in the trip to the forest. Layla's skin was completely pale as it wasn't a light grey anymore, her hair had darkened to black and her iris was fully black now. As the ventured, Layla's missing arm started to spill a black substance as they reached the middle of the forest. She could see bodies of dead kids surrounded in a circle with Layla's rotting corpse in the middle. Day stepped back in fear as Layla turned around with a perpetual smile of black as her black eyes with her natural black sclera, and the spilled black liquid formed into a hand and grabbed Day as she tried to run away. Little tentacles formed from the substance got underneath Day's skin and started to infect her but she was able to be let go. She ran for days but knew she couldn't run forever. Layla caught up with her and strangled her till
26.11.2021 09:59
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she passed out, she awoken in the orphanage but it's decades later as she had been in a coma. Day is thankful not to be infected but still has to obey Layla as she is titled as the mastermind, even though she is no mastermind. The 4th friend who went missing long ago was the mastermind. She helps those who get trapped in the abandoned orphanage to escape but same thing happens, she gets caught and as punishment they infect her fully to turn on the people she gained trust with and kill them. But someone escaped and burned the building. Day was thankful as her friends and others were set free.
26.11.2021 10:02
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Why were they all orphans? Here yall go: Layla - parents died because of an explosive by their neighbors who hated her family. She lost her left hand. She was 8 years old. Day - parents were too poor for another child and thought best to give her up to an orphanage when she was a baby. Divias - father murdered his mother when he was around 5 years old, father would have killed him if it weren't for neighbors hearing the mother's screams.
26.11.2021 10:20
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so basically everyone went missing in the orphanage overnight because Layla got all of the children who were considered pure and took over the orphanage. This incident is known as: The Lost Children Incident Of 14386, worldwide, and is still unsolved and none of the children and staff bodies were found since then.
26.11.2021 10:21
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The 4th friend went missing when going to the forest and got lost herself, before dying in the middle of the forest from dehydration. The reason why she was orphaned is unknown.
26.11.2021 10:00
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reminder to. read all of this later
26.11.2021 10:03
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lol i always write long ass shit.
26.11.2021 15:52
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this is very long I read half of it
27.11.2021 10:32
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okay
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