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Zee-rex
21.07.2017 01:19
Linkneko-check
scene kid-hair
unnaturally coloured eyes-check
i seems we have a mary sue on our hands boiz
Zee-rex
21.07.2017 01:20
Linkscene kid hair-check*
plasmabolt
21.07.2017 07:45
LinkOh no.......MARY SUE ALERT....
neoncat556
07.08.2017 00:31
Linkmarysues o nu
well if you would add more flaws and not be a "neko"
i mean u do what you want with your character but theres one think
The darkside of your character
The blood tears? i mean these r okay but it makes it look edgy
And that coloured hair,its fine to have it but ALOT of crazy mary sues have coloured hair,at least u only have ONE color
I dont like when im rude but its kinda true,maybe you should imrpove your character more,make it like more simple..okay?
hOLD UP
it's fine to have an OC that has animal ears and scene hair, as long as they have an original or creative backstory behind them. Then that's not a mary sue. Purely the fact that her characters has different colored eyes, animal ears and dyed hair does not automatically make her a mary sue.
sorry for butting in