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Twisted {Chap 1} (read below)
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21.12.2019
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21.12.2019 03:03
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let me type or I delete your comment :V {Gore waring!}
21.12.2019 03:03
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"Calling me a retard and telling me to shut up isn't gonna help, Jacy". I never called him by his real name. He slapped me across the face, and I hid my tears. It was dark. Probably 3:00 AM..? I woke up finally because the slap hurt her so bad. I think he slapped me so hard that he also scratched me. Also, he knocked me out. I was alone, I finally realized. I looked around and got up. I was there alone in a dark alley, and one light was on. I sighed in relief and picked up my phone. "Damn," I said, as there was no internet connection. I snuck it back in my pocket and sat down, since my house was far from where I was.I lived alone and walked to school alone. I didn't have many friends since I liked being alone. "Hey, loser!" He screamed at the weird girl; she draws the weirdest things. I was sitting by a tree when Jay-whoops, I meant Jacy threw a rock at her nose. She had the worst bloody nose! What a freak, but I feel bad. I thought. When Jacy and his friends were gone, I headed to the girl's bathroom and ch
21.12.2019 03:04
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and checked on the girl. She was bending down and the blood was dripping, and the white sink was covered in dripping red blood. Ouch, I thought. I slowly walked to her, avoiding Jacy's face peering into my mind. She turned her head as she saw me, and I quickly dashed to grab a towel. She was clueless at first, and then she realized what I was doing. She hesitated at first and I tilted her head back, holding the towel in one hand and pinching her nose with the other. Her nose stopped bleeding and I carefully let her head down. With a long silence and me cleaning the towel off best I can, she said: "I could have done all that by myself..." She smiled. I cackled and I placed the towel by the sink. "Drawings," I said. "Huh?" She was confused. "You draw weird and creepy stuff, right?" I said, still ignoring the fact that Jacy was in my head again. "Yeah, but nobody sees it. Im surprised you'd even speak of it," She shrugged. With no hesitance I said that they were good, could've sworn I saw blush coming from her.
21.12.2019 03:05
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She sighed."Jacy," She said. Oh no. "Pfft yeah, what about him..?" I answered. "Tsk. It's not a secret that you two are dating".She said. I looked at her and blinked. "Cloud," She spoke softly. I looked down then up at her, quite confused. "Im Cloud". She looked away, and lifted her hand up, gesturing for a handshake. "Aurora," I said. I shooked her hand and she skipped away. Not a secret, huh. I got back to reality for a second, and it was probably 3:50 AM by now. It was cold, but I didn't bother because I loved looking at the memories. "I..." Jacy couldn't speak. But I went in for it, yes, I kissed him. I paused and smiled and closed my eyes, "dreaming" again. Except the dreams actually happend. I hugged Jacy, and he hugged me back. Everybody was taking pictures and laughing and finally not judge me because I liked being alone. I opened my eyes again and sighed. I closed them and went back to Jacy. "Call me... " I couldn't think of a nickname. "Ari?" Jacy explained. "Yes!" I exclaimed. "And can I call you..
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"Yes!" I exclaimed. "And can I call you...Jay?!" I finished. He'd blush. "Sure," Jacy laughed. I quickly opened my eyes to find it that its really cold now. I franticly searched my pockets, my phone! It was gone! I stood up in panic and it was lying next to the only light. I quickly ran to it and stumbled to pick it up. The lights flickerd and flickerd again, and I patienlty waited for it to stop so I can find a way to get out of here. Instead, the only one light stopped flickering but shuted down. It was really dark and cold now, and my phone didn't work. At the worst time I heard baning noises. The scratch on my face still hurt, and the banging noises got louder. Now what?
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{sorry for bad grammar}
21.12.2019 03:06
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{inspo: kinser}
21.12.2019 03:08
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I love this story!!! UwU The only thing I would add is to make it clearer who is who and to add more descriptive words. The story is unique and I really like it! Please let me know when you write more, I'd love to read it!
21.12.2019 03:09
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ty! ^^
21.12.2019 03:11
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*is scared to ask if I can help you write it so doesn't ask...*
21.12.2019 03:13
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yes! you can! but I kinda want the story to be my way, but If i like the idea then i might keep wheatever u write owo
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21.12.2019 03:16
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*screams* *hugs*
21.12.2019 03:16
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*screams louder* *big hug*
21.12.2019 03:20
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*screeches* *BIGGER HUG*
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