Bad box
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trying-my-best 
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10.12.2021
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trying-my-best[OP]
10.12.2021 14:08
LinkI took the box it got abt 9 cupcakes I took with me-
Can you tell me if this is good for a scary story so far it’s for av and print
I read over it and saw some mistakes and other things so I edited it a bit,,I think it’ll look a lil better if it seemed more of fear or worry is that ok?,,other then that it seems really interesting /pos https://paste.pics/FAFFG
Ok thanks! I’ll take the help also if you seen any of these:
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It meant that the mc wasn’t done speaking but was ending it there ^^