Hmm, I really like this. Sure anatomy , symmetry and line art can be improved but that comes with time. I suggest looking art refs of animals. This way, you get a better idea on how their body’s are made up
These are nice. For now, I’ll give you like art tips. I’ve noticed some erased places that were later filled in. I suggest that if you mess up a line, you undo it and do it again rather than easing to fix it. I’d also work on creating colorful backgrounds
Your really good at background! Like I told coin dropper, you art is almost perfect. With more practice it will improve. I recon if you redraw this 2 months from now, it would be like...so AMAZING . You also just need to practice a BIT more. Oh, and make that girls hairline more visible.