Arise episode 2!
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Grim1111[OP]
16.12.2017 22:20
LinkOh wow this took a gosh darn while XD! Hope you guys like it!
Grim's powers: Water, and Ice control.
Hazel's powers: Earth, and Fire control.
??????? powers:
Sparrow
"random kid"
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So, I watched episode one, and this. Nothing really makes sense, and it all just kind of... happens?
Why are they so stoked to see a crystal? Or a "Prisim" (It's spelled prism, just so you know)? Who is that third one? Why did these two characters instantly become freinds? How come the fox one trusts the other one, even though he murdered someone with a rock in front of her?
Why did they want to touch the crystal even though the fox one cut herself on it. Why do I not even know the two main character's names?
I'd recommend spending more time setting up who everyone is and how the world works before actually starting the proper story.