critisization time... -_-
by:
EdgeCraftYT 
492
492
06.10.2020
17 comments
EdgeCraftYT[OP]
06.10.2020 12:42
Linknot done but i might as well put out wips..
CrimsonFireLion
15.01.2021 02:11
LinkOne of the characters look's like what a guy from youtube drew but cool
EdgeCraftYT[OP]
06.03.2021 00:58
Linkye this thas me prcticing after watching a tutorial vid :\
EEEE so cool and what is your favorite anime guessing on your pfp it's bleach because mine is to so .yay.
idk what kind of animation style that you want or if you want this to be an animatic but if youre looking for crtisism i would reccomend animating the in-betweens if those are keyframes and if you want smoother animation, or if its an animatic i would add lines in the direction of where the characters are attacking
in terms of art idk what to reccomend since art in animation is kinda hard to critisize without saying anything that includes changing the style
what i did notice is that the guy on the left gets taller after he throws a right side punch so maybe u should try working on shape consistency idk
yo sorry for replying late, but this was defiantly helpful and was great advice. is sad that I lost the file for this, but I will defiantly keep these tips in thought... thanks so much for the help!