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*odd whispering comes from dark corner of the room*

You hear screams, and shrieks, and crying, and maniacal laughing in the distance.

the noise fades away and someone comes out of the darkest corner of the room and then it falls to the ground, it seems to be ingured. severly. but... more likely mentaly then physically.

the person shrieks then looks at you. they seem to be relived. but still terified it looks around the age 8 ???: G-g-get awa-away fr-from me!

(k) the girl stares at Lizzie, terrifyed, as if Lizzie where the terryfingest thing in the universe ???: th-that's w-w-what th-the last p-person sai-said!

???: g-get away from m-me!

child runs at the wall, tickles the wall and walks through the wall, terrified

The child's running is very loud *CLUMP* *CLUMP* *CRYING* *CLUMP* *POOF* the child seemed to stop running

the child hears the chains and runns back into room ???: you-your a v-victim too! I t-trust y-y-you n-now. the child helps you out of the chains.

the child is sobbing still it runs away through the wall again

*it tickles the wall before goining thru the wall

the child: I- th-they ki-killed my mo-mother and f-father

(hullo?)

girl: mi-mine to- WAIT? i-is that y-you an-angela?? the girl runs toward the other girl. but the new girl looks at you and screams, and runs at a wall. *thump* that must've hurt the girl that you're with: this is a friend... its o-okay. my name's angela. this is my sister isabella. isabella: ow- wait, s-shes a f-friend?

isabella: it's a trick! angela run! angela doesn't move. angela: she was in chains, terrifyed. she is a helpless child too' isabella stops moving isabella: okay...

uh, this one is now closed, but you can check out my new one!

you here a child's voice in the distance. it says: "STOP!! PLEASE STOP!! PLEASE!!" it's screaming and sobbing. it seems to be in great pain, whereever it is.

the screaming and begging continues

the child is in a room that is located through the wall, a magical wall that will disapear if you tickle it. the child stoppes screaming, but is sobbing uncontrollably. nothing else is in the room exept for you the child is staring at the wall, terrifyed like something was there...

the kid: wh-who a-are y-y-you? g-get a-away from m-me!!

the kid: stares at the body, terrifyed and sad. the kid: "my mother-"

(um you there??)