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Broken world (ft. J and T)
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15.12.2022 20:51
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(Sorry for taking so long I was busy-)
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Broken world (a wwyd ft.Takashi and Jane) (Lore lore lore lore lore time) You/your oc were friends (or dating, it doesn’t matter your relationship with jane-) with Jane, A short blue haired girl, who normally would accompany you/your oc in your average day to day life. Though today was drastically different, all over the news it showed buildings, neighborhoods, cities being destroyed. People shown getting hurt, some even murdered, from the destruction. But what was the cause An intense battle was taking place for the fate of the planet To either be covered by darkness, or survive with a glimpse of light Just then, you/your oc heard a small knock on the door, anxious, and probably stupidly, you/they answered There she was, out there, bruised, cut, and scarred, stood a half-cut hero, Jane She stared down, she seemed spaced out, after a long second of standing and staring she collapsed into your/their arms. She was struggling to stand, she looked weak.
15.12.2022 20:53
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Unfortunately, not too far behind her was Entity of darkness she was presumably fighting, it had long squiggly tentacles, black as a crow’s feathers. It stood there for a moment. Menacingly. It then shot a tentacle at a face paced speed at you/those two. But quickly had the door shut on it by the same weak girl who presented herself to you/them a moment ago, she seemed to snap back into her senses. Wwyd?
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(There’s probably like a lot of gramma and spelling errors bc I forgot to reread it to make sure it makes sense so yeah enjoy reading this mess)
15.12.2022 21:26
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(Also for you simps who don’t feel like reading) In a nutshell: the world is ending, Jane is saving you, and now she’s currently up against the door blocking this tentacle monster thingy person from getting in and killing you two
15.12.2022 20:57
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May I use an animal oc??
15.12.2022 21:22
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Sure sure sure
15.12.2022 21:16
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I'll have her human ref up in a while but ima use my oc silver)) Silver: *looks at Jane with a mad and scared expression* hey... you alright?!
15.12.2022 21:24
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She didn’t say anything She was struggling to keep the door close, you could see her tremble each second she held it closed
15.12.2022 21:32
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Silver: *kicked her leg up to the door* go sit of the couch.... *she looked angry af!*
15.12.2022 21:35
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Jane understood, letting go of the door, only to lead her to fall on the ground, trembling, she crawled to the couch and layed on it
15.12.2022 21:37
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Silver: *she took her leg off of the door and held it shut with her hands* hey... *looked at Jane* you alright
15.12.2022 21:39
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She layed there for a moment, then shook her head ‘no’ “Everything hurts-“ she squeakily whispered, she was still trembling The door was getting harder to bare closed every second, the thing wasn’t giving up easily
15.12.2022 21:45
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Silver: *put one of her legs up against the door* just stay there
15.12.2022 21:57
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Jane nodded weakly, rolling over and hugging herself
15.12.2022 22:00
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Silver: *she was PISSED and ready to give this thing a piece of her mind*
15.12.2022 22:10
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The door broke open and there came the tentacle With quick speed it grabbed Jane from off the couch and pulled her out “I’m not done with you yet.” Said the thing, it’s voice was sinister and low
15.12.2022 22:13
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Silver: JANE! *she ran up to the thing* GIVE HER BACK *angry*
15.12.2022 22:16
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The thing gazed over at silver “Stay out of this!!” It sounded irritated, backing away It launched a tentacle at silver, attempting to grab her
15.12.2022 22:35
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Silver: *because she's skinny and fast she was able to dodge it* NO I WONT STAY OUT!
15.12.2022 22:37
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“This isn’t your fight!!” To sent out more tentacles to grab silver
15.12.2022 22:40
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Silver: *one got to close to her and she pulled a knife out of her hidden holster stabbed it* LIKE I GIVE A SH!T!
15.12.2022 22:41
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The thing shrieked in pain and began to cower away
15.12.2022 22:43
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Silver: *gave the thing a death glare* now put Jane the F*CK down!
15.12.2022 22:44
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“No!-“ It used it’s spare tentacles to cover her mouth, attempting to suffocate her “And if you do anything else your little friend’s going bye BYE!!” To said stepping back once more
15.12.2022 22:48
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Silver: *she looked shocked and mad then nodded as she stood normally and pointed her knife towards the thing* and if I put this away then she gets set down....
15.12.2022 22:50
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“…perhaps…” to thought Jane started to squirm, she couldn’t breathe, let alone stay in the state for much longer
15.12.2022 22:51
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Silver: deal.... or no deal.... *she was losing her patience*
15.12.2022 22:54
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“Mmm- deal.” It decided, letting go of Jane, she fell face first on ground, and coughed rapidly
15.12.2022 22:59
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Silver: *flipped her knife into the holster and ran over to jane*
15.12.2022 23:01
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Jane layed there, practically unable to do anything but breathe “I guess the thing not being awake will have to do, don’t get any funny ideas!” It said
15.12.2022 23:54
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Silver: *she glared angrily at the thing* shut up
16.12.2022 02:25
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the ground began to break, the thing was trying to rip this planet apart. and the only person who could of stopped it was pretty uch dead. within seconds, the world is doomed.
16.12.2022 02:45
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Silver: *she held Jane in her arms to make sure that she didn't fall or get hurt anymore* what would work....*she said softly*
16.12.2022 02:58
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Jane coughed “I- I- I’m sorry sil…I failed to keep this planet safe, now…we’re going to die.” To said weakly
16.12.2022 04:15
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Silver: no! There's something I think I can do.... *picks up Jane and dashes into her house*
16.12.2022 04:21
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She just went with what was happening The house was started to fall apart
16.12.2022 04:22
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Silver: *floped her ears onto her head and set Jane under her bed*
16.12.2022 04:28
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Jane layed there, almost unconscious
16.12.2022 04:29
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Silver: *leaves Jane and rushes out of her house and out to the thing* HEY! YOU!
16.12.2022 04:39
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The thing was almost done ripping the world apart “WHAT?!?” It rawred
16.12.2022 04:40
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Silver: remember this, ugly?! *flips her knife out of its holster*
16.12.2022 04:42
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“HEY! I HAVE FEELINGS!!” It sounded affended
16.12.2022 04:55
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Silver: AND SO DO I! SAME AS JANE! *she took a few steps closer to the thing*
16.12.2022 05:14
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It didn’t move “OKAY?!? YOUR POINT IS?!?”
16.12.2022 06:50
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Silver: YOURE RIPPING APART THIS WORLD! HAVE SOME DAMMED REMORSE FOR THE PEOPLE WHO NEVER DID ANYTHING TO YOU! *she walked closer*
16.12.2022 18:59
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“IT’S THE ONE THING THAT’LL MAKE SOMEONE HAPPY” it yelled at her, inching towards her
16.12.2022 19:02
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silver: *takes more steps closer* BUT WHO?! WHY!
16.12.2022 19:39
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“I I DON’T-“ it paused, realized it’s decision to end the world might not of been the best idea after all “I don’t know who actually. Or why. They just said they wanted this miserable planet to die, and I just, wanted to make them happy, so I’d at least have that.” It spoke admittingly
16.12.2022 19:49
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silver: *she walked closer* then stop this madness! this planet isnt miserable! so many innocent people live here and strive here
16.12.2022 19:55
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Jane had limped over to where the two were “Wait- say that again about you wanting to kill everything?!?!” Jane interrupted weakly “Where did you hear that?!?” “A voice…told me-“ it admitted “I don’t know how, and I don’t know why but it told me and I just wanted to make the person happy.” “That- that’s what I said.” Jane said boldly “I said that after my brother…hit..me..” she looked at the being with confusion “How did you hear that?!?!” “I don’t know?!?” It argued
16.12.2022 19:58
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silver: jane.... you're in bad shape.... *walks over to her*
16.12.2022 20:04
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“I- I know but-“ Jane looked at silver and then at the being, she started to laugh “You mean you ended the world because someone told you to while they were in a bad mood?!?” She began to chuckle “NO, I DON’T TAKE ORDERS ORM ANYONE.” The being spoke, from what was a tall and slimy black figure, began to transform, the slime began to rise from it’s feet to it’s head, showing a more clean and civil person, with short purple hair and a orange and red hoodie, clean dark jeans and rugged black and white converse shoes The being tentacles started to shrink into his waist until you could see them
16.12.2022 23:00
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Silver: what the.... *looks very confused but she's still on guard*
15.12.2022 21:24
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“Jane- “ he said, worried, grabbing. Her shoulders urgently. “Are you okay?
15.12.2022 21:27
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She didn’t say anything She was too focused on keeping the door closed with the little amount of strength she had left
15.12.2022 21:38
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He walked up to her, helping her keep to door closed
15.12.2022 21:40
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She began to cry, really putting in her all “I-I’m sorry void- I- I don’t think I can hold it much longer-“ she spoke squeaky, in a low whisper, her voice seemed damaged
15.12.2022 21:42
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“Jane- what’s wrong,” he asked, pushing against the door.
15.12.2022 21:57
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“S-something bad- something bad happened..” was all she said, the door was starting to open
15.12.2022 22:08
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He shoved his weight against the door.
15.12.2022 22:11
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The thing was extremely close to getting in It was practically inside, trying to grab a hold of Jane
15.12.2022 22:17
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“Jane- run. I’ve got this. “
15.12.2022 22:18
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Jane nodded, weakly she fell on the floor crawling away, she made it clear she couldn’t really do much in her state
15.12.2022 22:30
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He fought whoever or whatever was trying to open the door, digging his heels into the friend, sinking his claws into the wooden floor
15.12.2022 22:35
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The tentacle seemed to make a small squeal for a moment in pain. That moment was followed by the door collapsing on void and being held down by multiple tentacles A few grabbed Jane tightly and pulled her out “I’m not finished with you yet..” the thing said, holding Jane up to it’s face while crushing her body with the tentacles that were wrapped around her
15.12.2022 22:43
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Void hissed, getting his feet out of the wood, igniting his magic, his magic bright blue, stone erupting from the ground, wrapping around him. “Let. Her. Go. “
15.12.2022 22:46
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“Stay out of this if you know what’s good for you!!” It hissed, it’s voice was sour and low It’s grip became tighter around her
15.12.2022 22:48
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He tightened the grip of the stone around him. “I said- let her go. She’s already pretty beat- you don’t need to kill her to prove a point
15.12.2022 22:53
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It used it’s tentacles to push away the stone, giving it more room “She’s the only thing standing in the way of this planet’s destruction. Of course I need to kill her.” It spoke Jane began to suffocate, the tentacles were too tight around her fragile body
15.12.2022 22:54
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He launched himself at him, trying desperately to get him off her
15.12.2022 22:56
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“Get off of me!! You bug!!” It spoke disgusted, using another batch of spare tentacles to get him of it “Leave us be!!” It told void
15.12.2022 23:12
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“Let her go!” He growled, mad af, his eyes slit like a cats, making spikes quickly rise from the ground, trying to pierce him
15.12.2022 23:21
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It shrieked in pain, getting to higher ground “Looks like you weren’t the biggest of my problems” it told Jane Jane herself was unconscious, she passed out
15.12.2022 23:22
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Void kept his magic ready, his palms glowing. “let. Her. Go. Now. “
15.12.2022 23:24
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“NO!!” It rawred at him
15.12.2022 23:30
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He ran at him, furious, his magic burning hot and ready
16.12.2022 02:25
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it swatted void away with it's tentacles as if he were a bug
16.12.2022 02:28
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He grabbed one, trying to burn through it
16.12.2022 02:31
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It shrieked “LET GO OF ME!” it was aggressive, trying to get it’s tentacle out of void’s grasp
16.12.2022 02:32
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“ let Jane go-“ he held on with a firm grip
16.12.2022 02:35
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“No! This world deserves to be Eliminated no matter the cost! No matter what or who’s in the way.” It said aggressively, breaking free from void’s grasp
16.12.2022 02:38
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He growled, trying again. “ Why don’t you just get rid of the problem then? Not the world/“
16.12.2022 02:45
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“THE PROBLEM IS THE WORLD, AND THE PEOPLE ON IT” it hollard “I CAN’T BECAUSE THIS SHAM-SHACK OF A WANNBE HERO SAID SHE’D STOP ME!” It brandished jane’s unconscious body “SO NOW, I’M GOING TO RIP APART EVERYTHING IN THIS PATHETIC WASTE OF A PLANET AND EVERYTHING ON IT-“ Jane woke up instantly to those words “Who told you that?!?” She said loudly “I- I heard it, a voice told me…” the thing said looking at her “….that…that’s what I said…” she looked down shocked, “when Jan hit me….I was crying in my room- I- how did you hear that?!?” She asked “I don’t know, I just heard it while I was in a pretty bad mood.” The thing admitted
16.12.2022 02:47
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Void crossed his arms, livid
16.12.2022 02:56
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“…you mean you were going to actually destroy the world because I said so?!?!” Jane looked at him like he was crazy “I- NO- I DON’T TAKE ORDERS FROM ANYONE!” The thing told her “Uh huh- sure- like you didn’t just do that-“ “I DIDN’T!” “YOU MURDERED MY BROTHER-“ “SO?!?” “I SAID I WANTED TO KILL MY BROTHER!” “THAT DOESN’T MEAN ANYTHING?!?” The thing protested, it then shaped back to it’s original form, from what was a tall black slime-ish figure, slowly but surely the black goop raised from his feet to his head, revealing a move clean and proper human being, with short dark purple hair, a red and orange hoodie, and some nice jeans, the tentacles began to retract at his waist, He dropped Jane for a moment, only to scoop her up in his arms mid air, and jump down to solid ground, where void was “There. Now I do what I want.” He dropped Jane rudely, and crossed his arm (GREAT! Now void!! Punch him in the face!!)
16.12.2022 03:15
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He did just that. He punched him in the face
16.12.2022 03:20
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“OW!” The thing, or takashi, complained, his voice wasn’t as deep as before
16.12.2022 03:26
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He glared at him, his eyes still slit like a cats
16.12.2022 03:28
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Jane rubbed her head, she sat up, but she was still on the ground “You deserved that.” She told him “idiot.” “SHUT YOU LITERALLY HAVE BLUE HAIR AND DADDY ISSUES!” He snapped at Jane “How do you?!?-“ “You cry a lot about your problems, I’m still not sure why I can hear them though-“ Takashi shrugged
16.12.2022 03:35
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Void offered his hand to help her get up, cold towards takashi
16.12.2022 03:38
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Jane grabbed it, wobbling “Voido- Can you please carry me, I can’t stand- just like after you railed me that on-“ “I’m going to have to stop you right there before you make things awkward with your joke.” Takashi said uncomfortable
16.12.2022 03:47
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Void scooped her up into his arms protectively
16.12.2022 03:50
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She nuzzles him Takashi looked around at the rumble and rust at what was earth “So…. Now what?” He asked, looking at the too
16.12.2022 03:52
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He held her close, his eyes narrowed at takashi. “You’re takashi-“ he realized, anger boiling in his voice.
16.12.2022 03:54
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“Hm?-“ he looked void dead in the face “How do you know me?-“ Jane looked at void, confused
16.12.2022 04:19
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“ does the name croy ring a bell?” Pissed
16.12.2022 04:22
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Takashi’s eyes widened “…Uhm- funny thing was- I Uhm- uh-“ Jane, started to doze off, she was tired
16.12.2022 04:23
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He growled softly, holding Jane close still
16.12.2022 04:30
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“Listen…the past is the past?” He said not knowing what to say
16.12.2022 04:33
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“He had a long life ahead of him,” he set Jane on the couch
16.12.2022 04:34
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(What couch?!?!? The floor?!?!) “…okay, and?” He added
16.12.2022 04:45
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Hypothetically there’s a couch) “Why the hell did you kill him!”
16.12.2022 04:53
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(💀) “Money. Listen man, I was eating ice cube sandwiches. I had no choice.” He complained “He was worth a lot of money!”
16.12.2022 05:00
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He growled, the ground shaking slightly
16.12.2022 05:14
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Takashi stepped back a bit
16.12.2022 05:17
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He looked away sharply, crossing his arms, now fighting against his magic to contain it
16.12.2022 05:29
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Takashi watch, confused if anything
16.12.2022 05:32
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He glared at him, his eyes glowing a little
16.12.2022 05:35
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Takashi stood there for a moment
16.12.2022 05:35
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His shoulders shook slightly, the ground cracking
16.12.2022 05:43
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“Hey!! I require my need of being held to be satisfied!!” Jane whined Takashi looked at Jane “see? What did I tell you? You cry about you issues alot.”
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He looked at Jane and sighed. “Don’t talk sht about her either. “
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“Hey! I do what I want!” Takashi said irritated “True! Also please don’t be mean- you hurt me physically, and you know how much I hurt mentally, please don’t make it worse.” She asked takashi “Yeah fine, but there’s a lot of things wrong with you. Mentally that is.” Takashi shrugged “True.” Jane agreed
16.12.2022 05:50
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He threatens the spikes , barely missing him purposely
16.12.2022 05:54
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“Hey! Watch it elf face!” Takashi protested “HOLD ME!!” Jane whined more “SHUT UP!” Takashi yelled back “YOU’RE SO ANNOYING!” “Why don’t YOU shut up!!” Jane stuck her tongue out at him “WHY DON’T YOU MAKE LIKE YOUR PARENTS AND HANG!” Takashi yelled back Jane went quiet
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“ENOUGH!” Void roared, a ripple radiating out from him, magic , that felt like a strong with. He pinched his nose. “Enough. “
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No! NOT ENOUGH! WHY WOULD YOU BRING THAT UP?!?” Jane yelled at takashi “you’re telling me he was to dumb to realize they wanted nothing to do with you?!? They got rid of you!! And to make sure they’d never have to see you again they took their own lives!” Takashi added “Why do you hate me?!? I didn’t do anything to you?!?!” Jane started to tear up
16.12.2022 06:00
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Void grabbed him by the neck, his nails piercing his skin. “Out. “
16.12.2022 06:05
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Takashi took one of his tentacles and bashed it against void’s chest, freeing him from void’s grasp and knocking some wind out of void “No.” “Void…just leave him alone…besides there isn’t really anywhere else for him to go…” Jane admitted
16.12.2022 12:13
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He stumbled back a bit, trying to regain his breath. He was not happy
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Takashi didn’t really care, he was irritated Jane sat there, worried
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Void glared, going to the kitchen
16.12.2022 19:41
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(WHAT KITCHEN?!?!) Takashi shrugged and sat next to Jane “Is he always that mean?” “No, he’s normally the sweetest thing you’ll ever see” she told him “but you did try to end my life so-“ “Oh! What…is he a boyfriend?-“ “Husband.” “Ohhh- gotcha.” Takashi nodded
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this still open?
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yes yes yes
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hihi ok gettin oc
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Yay
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ok les go )) "J-Jane? What's happening?" she quivered
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Jane didn’t speak, she was too busy on the door and keeping it closed
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She sighed and leaned on it, keeping it closed
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The door started to cave in Jane was pretty much killing herself trying to keep the door closed with all her might
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Bumble looked worried and reassured her. "I'll stall." she mouthed. She released dozens of swarms of bees and let them go.
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Jane nodded, letting go and falling on the floor
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she also sent some paralyzing ones and she went ot get the first aid kit
16.12.2022 20:12
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Jane just laid there for a moment the door caved in, and the tentacle grabbed Jane and brought her out of the house “I’m not done with you yet.” It spoke
16.12.2022 20:13
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Bumble heard and rushed out, seething with anger.
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The thing began to squeeze her in it’s grasp
16.12.2022 20:24
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Bumble looked around desperately and found a rake, a shovel, and a pitchfork. she threw the rake and the shovel in its face and stabbed it a bunch of times with the pitchfork
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It shrieked in pain “STOP THAT! THAT HURTS”
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"THATS THE POINT?"
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With irritation, it swatted bumble away “GO AWAY, THIS ISN’T YOUR FIGHT.” It protested
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she hissed, (being the cat she is 😋) and turned into her cat form. "STAY AWAY FROM HER"
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(Meow meow) “THIS ISN’T YOUR FIGHT.” It said aggressively
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meow meow hiss hiss )) She hissed and lunged towards it and agilely climbs on top of its head
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“GET OFF OF ME.” it took it’s tentacle and wrapped it around bumble, squeezing her tightly
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She let out a hiss and a yowl and raked her claws along its face
16.12.2022 20:48
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“STOP THAT.” It moved it!s tentacle away from it!s face and body, “You better watch it if you know what’s good for your little friend.” It spoke, wrapping another set of tentacles around jane’s mouth, as an attempt to suffocate her
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She bound over quickly and sliced off the tentacle. She braced herself as she fell to the ground
16.12.2022 02:55
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Im gonna use my persona since they both are like glitches.... Let's see if I can find a uhhh ref.
16.12.2022 03:00
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Heres a good ref by a friend.. Wha what you OK bud?
16.12.2022 03:20
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She didn’t say anything, she was too busy keeping the door shut
16.12.2022 03:29
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Want some help with that Jane? *I go up to the door and try to hold it back with wood pieces I summoned*
16.12.2022 03:30
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She nodded her head weakly
16.12.2022 03:31
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I got this. *I chant some words and the door turns into metal* There that should hold for a bit....
16.12.2022 03:32
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Jane fell to her knees, she was sore and tired
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I can heal you in the back. I got some medicine that should help. Let's go.
16.12.2022 03:34
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She kinda just stood there bent over, she couldn’t walk, let alone stand
16.12.2022 03:40
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*I go to pick her up and teleport to the back of the house* I got you bro I got you..
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She didn’t say anything
16.12.2022 04:15
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*I try to heal her but it only able to heal her outside wounds* That's better atleast... You there jane? Stay with me.
16.12.2022 04:22
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Jane weakly nodded
16.12.2022 19:00
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Can I use some of my powers on you? It won't hurt, just help you a bit..
16.12.2022 19:42
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Jane again nodded
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(OMG OMG OMG YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS) *Devora stood there for a slight moment processing what just happened then popped to Jane’s side trying to help her* “Hun? What’s happening? Are you okay?” *her words came out as a slur barely even comprehendable*
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Jane didn’t respond, she was too busy keeping the door shut
16.12.2022 19:26
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(Hey so I’m creating a Devora AI run soooooo) *she held the door with her still dazed at what was going on*
16.12.2022 19:44
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(Fr?!. Does she still love Janie?) The door started to cave in, Jane wasn’t strong enough to hold it, she found herself slipping, her grip becoming unsteady
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(Maybe) *Devora held the door with her trying to hold her up at the same time*
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