Me Time.
9 comments
pablofawkes
18.09.2017 00:47
LinkThis has really nice composition. The person is obviously the subject, but the sky is so large that it allows the frame to not feel filled with just her. The warm colours on her fdace make the rest seem so cold, but they make it seem like that kind of cozy cold, like a winter night by the fire of an old lo cabin, reading old poetry books
I really appreciate the moon, and hoiw it's so clearly based on an actual moon that one could see, rather than the more common absolute crescents.
The marks on the tree look reeally good, a natural, kind of chaotic, beauty.
My one and only suggestion would be, if you were to redraw this, to make the ground just a touch lower, to make the sky a bit more open looking.
TL;DR, you dun gud, m80
pablofawkes
18.09.2017 00:49
LinkAlso, for future reference, because the moon is a big ball that looks crescent because the earth is casting a shadow on it, there shouldn't be stars where the rest of the moon would be. It's barely noticeable in your drawing, but there is one star just a touch too far in.
Other than those two very minor things, it's a great piece.
Trin249[OP]
18.09.2017 00:49
LinkI really don't care how it looks or what people think of it, I'm bored, but thank you hun.
Trin249[OP]
18.09.2017 00:50
Linkand why are you acting like an art critic.
pablofawkes
18.09.2017 00:50
LinkThe best way to do art, in my opinion.
Trin249[OP]
18.09.2017 00:51
Linkah.
loveu
pablofawkes
18.09.2017 00:51
LinkI like to leave comments on stuff that catches my eye. I always feel better when I give an in-depth comment, because that's really what I crave.
I make art for myself, but I want people to tell me their opinions.
Trin249[OP]
18.09.2017 00:52
Linkaww do whatchu love<33
pablofawkes
18.09.2017 00:53
LinkYou too.