might repost of FA's brokeness
by:
CloudedFeelings-- 
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27.10.2019
11 comments
Starlossom
27.10.2019 01:35
Linkahem
may i criticize?
CloudedFeelings--[OP]
27.10.2019 01:37
Linkyes sure
this sucks ngl
Starlossom
27.10.2019 01:39
LinkI would put more detail on the pumpkin in the bg
and for the shadows/black outline
maybe put the opacity a bit lower for it?? it makes a smoother softer effect
and for the clothes the white shading makes it look weird
maybe low opacity + darker shade of clothes?
and for me the hair is pretty bland, maybe try small low opacity black lines in the hair?
Starlossom
27.10.2019 01:40
Linkor lighter shade of clothes
Starlossom
27.10.2019 01:41
Linkcount as many times that i said opacity :0
CloudedFeelings--[OP]
27.10.2019 01:44
Linkoki
1. I did that for a reason, just to make it simple
2. that's how I usually shade and I just wanted to add some light ;w;
3. I do not do lines in hair, I learned it just makes it look weird in my art
CloudedFeelings--[OP]
27.10.2019 01:48
Linkand she's a halloween themed character, do not expect me to make her light unless it's her skin
Starlossom
27.10.2019 02:11
Linka h
I do not have the patience or space to draw 5 whole fingers