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"Lowmoon To Ivypaw" (Part 1)~
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06.08.2023
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06.08.2023 06:14
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(Sorry for deleting comments, as always) Basically a continuation of this --->
06.08.2023 06:15
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Y'ALL. 👏🏽WHY. 👏🏽ARE. 👏🏽YOU. 👏🏽A. 👏🏽WAKE.
06.08.2023 06:20
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Okay, I'm gonna ignore the amount of insomniacs in this room at the current moment and explain this, as I always do. ✋🏽 First off... Please be advized- ⚠️MAJOR BLOOD WARNING FOR SCENE 6⚠️ PLEASE PROCEED WITH CAUTION!!!
06.08.2023 06:34
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"Lowmoon To Ivypaw" -- Apprentice to Mentor. The BloodFangs are a sort of cult made to take down the leaders of Thunder Pack. Ivypaw, being part of this cult, has trained Lowmoon to be vicious and unruly since young. One of his major tasks in the BloodFang's plot was to rid of the Pack's healers; Sunrange and Crippleleaf, so when it eventually comes time for an attack, they'll have no source of nursing. This worked, of course, but Thunder Pack was able to quickly rebound after their loss by sending Angelwing to train under Sky Pack's healer; the wise Brownwing. During a short period of scheming, the BloodFangs were relatively dormant, giving Lowmoon a chance to grow and become a Moon Warrior. Throughout this dormant phase, Lowmoon grew closer to Angelwing, mended his rivalry with Ravenclaw; one of his late litter mates, and found peace within himself after one of his greatest lapses of his apprentice-hood. Learning to atone gave Lowmoon a chance to face his demons and finally be free.
06.08.2023 06:43
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This is the first time in a WHILE I've been able to experiment with expressions and play around with old characters that always seemed rather dull. I went back and read the first installment of New Moon I wrote back in middle school (169 pages of torture) to look for more details on Sunrange and Crippleleaf's death, and turns out... they were killed by raiding Spark Pack Warriors. Somehow, I came up with a completely new plot-point without even realizing it... but now that I know about it, I actually like this version way more! Lowmoon has always been an interesting character to me, even when he wasn't all that fleshed out in the beginning of the series. He was just.. "Grrr, I'm always grumpy and I have no reason behind it besides the fact my Dad left, rawrr!" But now... this plot-hole brings upon a new conflict set-up between these characters in the future! Of course, Ivypaw and the rest of the BloodFangs get punished for attempting to take down Thunder Pack, but Lowmoon never faces these repercussions!
06.08.2023 06:48
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I know I'm writing a lot- please excuse me, but I'm really excited to finally be able to flesh out this story and bring upon new twists and build a genuinely interesting plot (unlike the original) Y'see, Angelwing was super close with Sunrange when she first joined Thunder Pack. How do you think she'll react when she discovers him and Crippleleaf weren't ACTUALLY killed by raiders, but by her current mate..? This of course would be WAYY down the road after Ravenclaw's already been killed when Angelwing and Lowmoon hook up, but like.. C'MON MAN! THAT'S BRUTAL!! I'm gonna leave it at that for tonight. I'd love to continue this someday! With that being said, as always.. please take care of yourselves, and have a great night/morning/afternoon~ 🫶🏽
06.08.2023 06:15
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Oops my bad Also this is very scrumptious
06.08.2023 06:15
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No worries!~ Thank you very much! 😊🫶🏽
06.08.2023 06:18
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^_^ Now I shall sit and happily wait for more of these..yummy
06.08.2023 06:15
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THIS IS SO GOOD
06.08.2023 06:49
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THANK YOOU!! ❤️
06.08.2023 06:17
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so cool! love the writing
06.08.2023 06:49
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Ahh, thank you! I'm glad~ 😊❤️
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