juju lollipop
5 comments
Medeea2
30.09.2017 18:36
Linkcan i eat it
Medeea2
30.09.2017 18:36
Linkpleaseeeeee
clipclop[OP]
30.09.2017 18:39
Linkoh hell no
this is what you'll become:
https://static.tumblr.com/1abe487215926483da1bf12940b1f6e5/qk53329/k6qn8q912/tumblr_static_tumblr_static_2ir63fo5hy2o4oos0coksgkwo_640.gif
Criticism- Is the shading supposed to just make it look nice or actually shade? I can't tell where the lighting is. Try to work on accuracy shading before shading to look good. Also, at the end, the arm kinda dissapears for a frame. Also, that's a really stiff arm, is that person ok? It's not physically possible for an arm to be just straight. They are always bending, if only a little. Also, the lollipop looks like it's made of rubber. It bends and reshapes when it's moved. Lollies should be stiff. It's also a little flat at the top. If you can't fit your art in the space provided, it's ok to make it smaller. The colors that you used don't combo together, and make the animation hard to watch. Try to use more appealing and fitting colors.
Compliment- the animation itself is smooth, and that's hard to do. Keep up the good work!
I rate 3/10