I’ll rate your ocs
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FoggySkies 
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12.04.2020
61 comments
FoggySkies[OP]
12.04.2020 15:54
LinkCredit Lonley Paradise for idea
His character is so adorable, he’s such a nice guy and I would definitely give him a sandwich. The purple yellow and black go well together but I think another color scheme with blue or something could make him a little better.
7.9/10
The main aspect that really makes it stand out is the head, I can instantly recognize it with how distinct it is. He the brown pancho thingy goes well with his color scheme. Though it could use a couple of extra details, his design is simple. Not that there is anything wrong with simple in that regard.
7.6/10 Nice
Your art is actually really good, your very underrated. The first one has a nice belly pattern and the grey goes well with it. As for the second one, it looks like it has a lot of potential, and could be a really fun character. Just add more details to make the designs more interesting.
6.6/10 for both
Love his color scheme, but I like his alt clothing a little better. Such a interesting head shape as well. I also like how the hoodie contrasts with us personality but maybe try different outfits for him.
8/10 well rounded
Although her tail is very interesting, it could be a little rounder and smaller. You could also make the colors lighter as well. However the collar, wings, and halo are a light pink and that works really well. Just try and change some things here and there.
7.6/10 nice
thanks for rating her ^^
question: Why should her tail be rounder and smaller?
Maybe it shouldn’t... Idk I’m not good at making suggestions I just thought it would make the character look more fluent
This one really has some potential, I actually find it’s design to be really solid. I like the facial features and the patterns all around the body. Maybe throw some reds or purple and there. Also take you time with your drawings there is no need to rush! Good luck with 1,000!
7/10
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I like here wings, that was a really cool idea! I think her color scheme is good, but it could be brighter. Maybe swap out the dark blue for a different color. I also think she should be a lit fluffier. Maybe make her tails or wings have crystals or something.
7.3/10 cool bapie
Hmm, I don’t think crystals was what I was going for. It was something more to match my username, and I wasn’t going for lots of fluff. The color scheme also wasn’t supposed to be very bright, as the bright blue pendant was just meant to add a little pop of color, and the pendant is what gives Ice her powers. Without it, she can’t fly. I understand what you’re saying, though.
The theme of Ice was to have a soft color palette, with some darks in there to represent the two sides of her personality. The bright pendant represents Ice’s power, and how she feels that she’s nothing without it. Whenever she takes off her pendant, her color flushes out and she’s reduced to a grayscale.
However, I understand what you’re saying and what you’re going for.
Wow you really thought a lot about your character... maybe 7.5/10 because she is so interesting
I love that she depends on her pendant and there is so much lore about her. Maybe being not as fluffy makes her look like she is younger than others of her species who are older. Her colors are actually cool they work well. I don’t really know what you should add I’ll leave that up to you to decide
The concept is really cute and the bandana ties everything together. I can’t find much to critique, other than the fact that the tail seems a bit plain. Perhaps add some splashes of white in there? The patterns of black on the face by the nose seem a bit overwhelming, rather I’d have one spot around the eye and one around the nose, rather than one by the mouth as well. The ears are a bit plain as well; I think you should add maybe some white to there. Overall it’s a very solid oc, I just think you could redesign some patterns.
8/10
Love the spikes, and the excessive amount to me is a good thing. I also like his arm, it works very well. Maybe try a more rigged or jagged mouth or something Idk. I like some of the cute drawings you did with him. Him or her? I can’t tell
7.5/10
Love his head shape and how lanky he is. Fishbowl on his head and they way you draw him is great too. Him her? I’m bad at that kind of thing. Nothing really wrong with him, but maybe add some tan in the chest area? Idk he’s fricking great
8/10 GA-RATE