I think its cute! However, your lines can use a little bit of work. Try drawing a sketch before you begin. Then, start the actual linework. Each time you draw a line, try making it a solid one.

You are glamorous!Babe you are is so good to me,I think you are an artist!You belong here.Well if people start making you cry or hurt you feelings their just some 8 year old.Their not saying it to your face their saying it to a screen! And I will always love your art no matter what.