Constructive Criticism 0v0

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Pomegranate[OP]
02.01.2018 16:43
LinkAttatch the anim you are looking at plz
Pomegranate[OP]
02.01.2018 16:44
Link(So like if your commenting on a specific anim attatch it)
Pomegranate[OP]
02.01.2018 16:46
LinkSo like I dunno comment on mah stuff so I can improve
Pomegranate[OP]
02.01.2018 16:47
LinkBut I guess I will also criticize your stuff if u want XD
Pretty good! Just a tip, draw the circle for the eyes before you color the skin, it helps make it look smoother.
Also, for hair, (I neglect this often but it helps) use lots of little sort of leech shaped things to form it, it makes it look more natural (use the see through frame to trace over your skeleton helps also)
But this is good, using the facial cross is important and not enough people do it! Keep up the good work!
ThE colors are great! The hair is smooth and looks nice! My only complaint would be the nose is a bit out of proportion as is the chin. The eyebrows are black and the hair is pink XD. The shading is amazing! I love all the tones! Maybe a few imperfections on the face? (Slightly darker or lighter dots at realism). But it's beautiful!
She has a very nice shirt and upper body! The legs are too small, and the hips are too low for the arms. Move them up and define them more? The eye is shaded, so I would suggest also shading the body. The eye is beautifully colored! The arms are a bit thin, but the head and upper body look in perfect proportion! Keep practicing!
How does my horror drawings look to you?
A few examples:
http://flipanim.com/anim=SYSftu1O
http://flipanim.com/anim=PLoZUqlb
http://flipanim.com/anim=IspXapho
http://flipanim.com/anim=6bbAZtCO
http://flipanim.com/anim=qZF8boF3
http://flipanim.com/anim=5qxQ3FTh
http://flipanim.com/anim=3VQXc3G2
http://flipanim.com/anim=2g7En4sH
http://flipanim.com/anim=2ock2yJF