heres my oc foxleap read his diccription in the comments

foxleap laid down in the sunlight warmed grass in camp

foxleap waited for patch to get back he needed to ask her/him something

foxleap waited for him to come in

foxleap helped him up "you ok!?"

yes) foxleap looked at him "can I ask you something..."

"I I love a kittypet…" he said

foxleap nodded

foxleap closed his eyes and sighed "im going to bring her here..." he mewed (could you be the kittypet you can use your oc!)

sure

next day foxleap walked in with a pure white she cat (her collors gone) "I found a loner willing to join!" he said louldly

he blushed at her ravenstar walked out of his den and looked at the white she cat "whats your name?" he asked

raven star fiddled with his paws "why do you want to join?" he asked foxleap got worried what if she told the truth?

he sighed raven star stood up and jumped onto the high rock and looked down at her "may all cats who can hunt come to hear my words!, we have a new apprentice chicka step forward please."

"from now on your names chick paw and your mentors foxleap." he mewed foxleap purred and touched his nose to hers

he purred "come on time for fighting practice, apprentice." he added

he leads her into the forest and into the sandy hollow "so this is a easy move you jump and pin your aponent like this!" he said flinging himself onto her

he got up "ok try and ill to the next move." she lunged and he ducked under her and pushed up onto her belly

lol)

he chuckled "you need to not give your enemy time to do that think of a way to stop me try again." he mewed he readied him self

foxleap went to do the move when she...(you say what she did)

foxleap saw patch

foxleap fell back chickpaw on top of him "oh- hi patch!"

"want to join battle practice ?" he asked him

he fliked it away "so you to pretted im cloveclan and attack at the same time." he mewed the bent down and growled

he pounced on them carefully pinning them "what do you do now?" he asked

He gets up and battery chickpaws ears then when she was off guard he pinned her his muzzle to her throat he got up "and that's how you die." He mewed "now it's hunting practice time."

Fox leap stared at them purring

He giggled as patch crumpled the lead "patch come here please."

Oki) "patch were going towards the border you can't follow us you need to go back to camp kiddo." He mewed rubbing his paw on patch's head

(Gtg take a shower!)

Fox leap looked at him sternly "no go back to camp patch kit." He mewed

He walked to chickpaw and waved his tail meaning for her to follow

*sigh* "sometimes I wish he listened." He mewed

"What you see?" He asked (she's never said a word lol when will she talk?)

Bye) Foxleap felt her warmth he blushed a bight "w-what you mean?"

Petal kit saw patch kit walk in his head down and his tail she padded up to him "you ok patch kit?"

oof petalkits rammed over by her brothers