can some1 pls help me idk if my thing is good sofar

It is very likely that you have stood and pledged allegiance to our flag many, many times. You have pledged for “liberty, and justice for all.” This occurs so often that it may seem like a chore to some. Time and time again it has been rehearsed, engraved into your mind, like a scorched plank of wood. You pledge to the flag of red white and blue, with broad stripes and bright stars. America, the Land of the Free. But just how united and free are we? Have you acknowledged what is going on in our nation, or do you continue to pledge blindly to a country with leaders of corrupt power who dictate the freedoms of minorities? A new year of opportunities for our country should begin to form steps to a brighter future. A new leader for our country should bring new improvements for our land. What has this year brought? Nothing. Instead, it has taken. It has taken people from their newfound homes in the US, made to keep them away from wars and chaos, and sent them back towards the fighting and destruction they seek

seeked to escape from.

oh it needs to be sought

im changing the last part It has taken people from their newfound homes in the US, where we promised a safe environment for all.

help the scorched plank of wood i forgot to change it LMAO

omg this sucks the teacher has the flu for 3 days now so icant ask for help