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Thunder1245[OP]
02.05.2021 12:00
Link(this takes place in a place called The White Void, there is no end to it unless the owner of the place, FEAR who is the dude who has two thin rings that both connect making an X around FEAR's right eye, although the rings aren't used to cover up his scar, it's more to keep shut of his eye. despite me making a drawing of his right eye opened, let us just say that isn't exactly how his right eye would look if he had the ability to exactly open it, it closed for a reason but he never exactly explains to anyone what reason exactly. but if you want you may make assumptions as you wish. but also the first frame you see with MR. Chromo isn't actually there. it's more like I guess a hologram of him, FEAR uses it to sorta show "oh you mean this old hag?" going out to insult him and try to give a more poor reason as to why exactly he can just straight-up insult him or change your mind of view on him. just to also tell you why this isn't a well-made dialogue or interesting one is cause FEAR isn't as good with whats-
Thunder1245[OP]
02.05.2021 12:11
Link- bad or what's worse. so he thinks Mr. chromo betraying him or snitching on him is worse, there is a backstory to why exactly he thinks that was a big deal to him. although ill explain later, as for now I'm rather explaining what's going on so you can understand the exact context of this small comic. but what his exact goal here he wishes to accomplish is for you to put Mr. Chromo (once FEAR sends you back to The Sorrow City(a grayscale city where people around you just really don't care as much or bother paying attention, the reason why I chose it to be a city Is cause I always thought a city would be busy, no time to exactly talk, or even communicate from a few specific movies I watched and their views on cities, so I thought the people would be very much like that to a point it goes grayscale to show how depressing the area truly is. but, the only few people who have soul there are: FEAR, Mr. chromo(a bit.) and a few other civilians which is a low or medium chance you'll find an actually emotional civili-
Thunder1245[OP]
02.05.2021 12:14
Link-an, but besides that onto the point.) Mr.chromo in a very upset state of mind, sorta make him feel like crap about his 'mistakes' or 'regrets'. that way FEAR will get satisfaction out of as he watches from The White Void meanwhile you yell at Mr. Chromo. that's exactly what FEAR wants. to get the feeling of revenge at his own hands. but, you have an option.
Thunder1245[OP]
02.05.2021 12:18
LinkYou can choose to either: not do what Fear desires or expects you to do (sorta doing his dirty work to make Mr. chromo feel guilty or expose him in any way possible.)
OR
you can choose to: do what fear gives you in whatever vibe you get that sorta tells you Mr. Chromo is a villain and just uses you so he can also put you along with 'The Rest'. (DOING his dirty work)
sure! that perfectly works, you can start it as you wish, let's maybe say FEAR sends you down back to The Sorrow City where you sorta open your eyes to Mr.Chromo looking as if he's worried sick and was possibly trying to shake you awake, you assume you had perhaps passed out just on the sidewalk while walking with Mr.chromo, few people pass by staring at the both of you)
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Mr. Chromo: "Ah thank god, kiddo you got me worried sick!.." *he looked around knowing people were staring at him, and as well Lizwey, he became aware.* "listen. are you able to get up in any way possible? I get you just woke up from just passing out but we gotta get moving. don't want people eyeing us like we're crazy or something...unless if you want I can pick you up if that works."
Mr. Chromo: ...*sigh*.."all right then I guess we'll go home." *he picks up Lizwey and slowly stood up while holding her, he looks both ways of the sidewalk and began walking the way to his house.* "alright just try not to move too much since I'm not exactly used to picking up people or.. 'kids'??...whatever you are.."