well, your art is already amazing, but i do have a few things less messier lineart? ik that i'm not the best at lineart, but i've seen sometimes when your lineart can be a lil bit..messy? it can also look a little bit shaky, so yeah idk, but the head kind of bothers me. it kinda looks a lil bit small?? also, a few anatomy fixes. other than that, your art is great!! <3

You have very pretty art, but here are a couple things that could help you improve. :) 1. The pastel colors you usually use are adorable, but you have to be careful because sometimes they kind of... run together and it's hard to tell what's what. When doing pastel, maybe consider doing darker lineart (it doesn't have to be black) so the drawing stands out more. 2. Your people are so cute! I think just studying anatomy would help a lot. That would bring your art to the next level. :D