i need an opion on somethin'
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Idkextra[OP]
16.06.2018 01:00
Linkso..im makin' a story on quetov. and i wanted you guys opion on it and don't get mad because not ALL the grammmer right /:
I was dreaming a thing was calling me "Elisa" it called in an echoed voice.I woke up after a while my heart was pounding."wha-what?" I said.I didn't recognize this place.Then I shook myself off. I forgot that I was at my aunts.My parents had recently died.I looked in the mirror,my white blond hair was in the tight bun "Elisa!" my aunt called as I raced downstairs. My aunt pointed to the dishes."Wash" she told me,she never liked my mom so she reflected it on me. I starighted my hair up and got straight to work. I finished with all the dishes completed. My aunt looked over them,and shooed me off like the nobody lifeless thing I was. I didn't care though,I stopped caring a LONG time ago I walked dizzly to my room,creaky steps were everywhere,now see MOST people have carpet or at least a rug on the floor or tile,something OKAY(no offense just wanted to address that)but nope not my aunt creep
Idkextra[OP]
16.06.2018 01:01
Link-y wooden broke stripes were better.I say that was idouitcey (oh and im 9 so don't hate on my crappy grammer I'M TRYIN' ALRIGHT?)I heard a common "lifeless a****ole" but I didn't care.I don't CARE anymore,im going to my freshmen year of high school,yeah yay the firey fricking pits of h-e double hockey stick open up and swallow me whole.I got to my bedroom layed on the bed took out my phone,put on some music,layed down,and passed out. That's what always happens an probably won't change,AT ALL,EVER,IN ETERNITY,okay stop being a lifeless b***h get your $h!t together and stop thinking.I woke up with a huge "BRINNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG" to my ears,normal,everyday,life.My life's like this always i don't care though,at least if i do I'm being sarcastic,so yeah I've just givin' up on life at this point but that's fine with me.I on't care anymore I get up finally.I get my old washed out blazer on,and my backpack and go to school,no smile,no frown,stone,cold,face,but i don't care anymore I could care less that's my life fo' ye
Idkextra[OP]
16.06.2018 01:01
LinkAs I arrived at school my face turned from a "I'm a f******' failure to everyone" to "pretend to look happy about coming to your first day at high school"I saw the typical streotyped dramatics and mean kids who don't get a frickin' life,and go aroun' after high school braggin' about it though no one cares.I grabbed my backpack and took a breath,as i walked to my class. Then I bumped into a boy A BOY,great Elisa you just ruined your frickin' no talk streak. "Oh,Im so sorry!" I faked to be sorry,srsly get a life get up go and say a small sorry no need to STARE at me,"Uh it's okay,just be more next time. NEXT TIME WHAT NEXT TIME? I faked a small smirk "Oh well nice knowin' yeah" as i got up to walk away i was stopped by a "The name's C.J Cooper Jay Wade" I repiled in the most unamused tone. "Its Elisa""Elisa Ettet"
Idkextra[OP]
16.06.2018 01:02
LinkI finally was able to walkaway from,HIM. I walked to my class, "English english english.." I mumbled to myself calming from the uh..how do I descibe it....werid.....yeah werid. I finally got to english and guess who i spot sitting down NEXT TO the only EMPTY stop."Hey.." he said in the most un toned annoyed like "I've been waiting for you voice...."