take flight prolauge two
9 comments
Thepapersandwich
10.09.2017 23:36
LinkWhy would the mother just accept that the newborn who just FLEW into her arms was hers
Meg1art[OP]
10.09.2017 23:43
Linkbecause they looked exactly alike, duh. also others instinct. just please dont be a critic.
also im running out of ideas
Thepapersandwich
10.09.2017 23:45
LinkHave you even seen a real newborn
They look nothing like humans
Thepapersandwich
10.09.2017 23:46
LinkAlso, maybe come up with the ideas before you start making the series?
Daisyasdf
10.09.2017 23:47
Link@Thepapersandwich
yea i agree
always have a plan/draft before making the story
trust me, i learned
SmilingNyan
10.09.2017 23:48
Linkyo man we're gonna be critics if we want. I'm actually not entirely self loathing with my writing so I think I can make some judgement if i want.
SmilingNyan
10.09.2017 23:49
Linkand yeah planning is key. tRUST ME. ive ended up with writers block for months and a really bad plot on the only major project I've actually finished cause i didnt plan
this just in everyone some clouds and have vaginas and some clouds have *****es