may you put some in a link, plz

For Mallory:

For Mallory: You couldve added one more finger, so that she would be more human, also the character is kinda dull, so you could add a bracelet, or something like that, or somthing in her hair, and you could give her different hair styles, because I saw the original as weel She would look ok, with her hair down, curly or straight

For Moon:

For Moon: You couldve made an outlining of the mouth, so we know for sure its a mouth, and he could use a tail, it ust doesnt look that interesting without a tail and if you add a tail, you could make it a different colr, it may look better that way :)

For You: You could lower the mouth, and give your person nails,it would just look better with nails, not usually do I see that, wow, just noticed, maybe its because people dont really show hands, but if they do its usually a Furry, or something ,(SO YEAH, THATS MY CRITIQUE)

so do I get fanart, I just noticed you put that?

ohhhhh, I see the tail, its sooooooo big