New Series: "Demonz"
by:
TheRedSSJKing 
499
499
01.04.2018
44 comments
pablofawkes
16.04.2018 00:03
LinkCame from the ad you put in Smilingnyan's comments.
This looks really bad.
Don't advertise in people's comments.
pablofawkes
16.04.2018 00:07
LinkAlso, "bad angels" and "good demons" is a concept that has been done to death. Also, angels are pure beings and demons are twisted, evil creatures. Your concept just changed the words' meanings.
Henricksgenration
16.04.2018 01:50
Linkohhh hush nerd........
Henricksgenration
16.04.2018 10:39
LinkI think this looks great unlike your tone ........if you don't like the ad move on dumby
TheRedSSJKing[OP]
16.04.2018 17:43
Linkyeah NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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pablofawkes
16.04.2018 22:28
LinkDon't advertise in comments
Lunarthegreat
21.04.2018 16:03
LinkIf he can't do ads on comments don't spam in comments
hit me up if u need one but dont give me too much to do pls i am a busy woman
I only promise to try and not to bother you too much, but I do need a couple designs, and you are one of the best, if not the best animator I have ever seen.
If she were talking to pablofawkes she would have replied to one of his comments. =.= guess who that leaves, bucko
This seems terribly rushed and has, from what I can tell, no plot. Except maybe “uuuh demons fight angels and the good guys are bad”
Please think before making a series. It’s a lot of work and not for the uncommitted and off-the-fly
it's not rushed, the story is that the angel Akilir(who is bassically lucifer) broke the harmony between the demons and angels by straight up murdering the entire demon royal council, including the king, because something in his mind just, snapped. but the prince survived and said prince goes by the name Vinz.
Thats jsut some worldbuilding that's as shallow as a kiddie pool
Where's the actual STORY? You know, with characters and drama and motivations
WELL I'LL MAKE A YOUTUBE SERIES WITH ACTUAL TALKING AND MORE ROOM FOR THE LORE, STORY, PLOT, AND THE CHARACTERS IN BETTER DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
first i have to make a script, then i have to get some voice actors, then i have to animate the episodes, and create the land and cities!! I will make this popular, AND IT WILL BE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
or
you could actually explain the story of it to me and stop hiding the fact you don't have one, much like you seeming to not have any tact or writing skill.
soooooo the advertising is anoying but i made a villan any way cuz im bored
Listen, I won't judge. I'm creating some kind of bug anime of a sort. I don't know, man. The designs were fun though.