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16.11.2019 05:41
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POV: The neighborhood's quiet kid knocked on your door to tell you that Brian's gone and that his mom won't wake up.
16.11.2019 05:42
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Jacky:*Stares at him*
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16.11.2019 05:43
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16.11.2019 05:43
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He rubbed his neck, looking up at Jacky with a pitiful expression.
16.11.2019 05:46
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Jacky:*She sigh* "you haven't seen him anywhere at all?"
16.11.2019 05:48
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He shook his head, fidgeting with his sweater. "No.."
16.11.2019 05:50
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Jacky:"We should find him"
16.11.2019 05:51
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"Okay.."
16.11.2019 05:53
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Jacky:*She would put her hoodie on and lock the door*
16.11.2019 05:54
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He stepped back a bit, wiping away a few tears. He was more concerned about his mom and how she was unresponsive, but he always did what older people told him to.
16.11.2019 05:57
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Jacky:*she'd think * "wanna check up in your mom before we search.."
16.11.2019 05:58
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He nodded and walked across the street over to his house. He went inside and upstairs to her room and sat down next to his mother's body.
16.11.2019 05:59
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Jacky:*she followed him*
16.11.2019 06:00
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He sat on his knees and placed her head in his lap, staring into her glossy eyes. His face held no emotion like it normally did.
16.11.2019 06:02
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Jacky:"Mind if i see if your mom is alright.."
16.11.2019 06:02
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"Not at all." He said softly.
16.11.2019 06:04
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Jacky:"Thank you.." *she place her fingers on the the women's veins*
16.11.2019 06:06
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«There was a faint pulse but it was slowing down quickly»
16.11.2019 06:07
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Jacky:"......her Blood isn't flowing like it should"
16.11.2019 06:09
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He bit the skin if his lip off anxiously, cupping his mother's face.
16.11.2019 06:11
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Jacky:"She needs oxygen"
16.11.2019 06:12
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"We don't have any oxygen tanks.."
16.11.2019 06:14
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Jacky:"I do my Dads..-are both doctors"
16.11.2019 06:16
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He didn't respond, letting out a shaky sigh.
16.11.2019 06:17
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Jacky:"ill..run over and get it"
16.11.2019 06:18
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"Okay.."
16.11.2019 06:19
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Jacky:*she run fast dashing back to her house*
16.11.2019 06:24
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He waited patiently, his mother wheezed from time to time.
16.11.2019 06:27
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Jacky*She ran back* "Im..*huff* Back...
16.11.2019 06:29
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He looked up and waved. His mither's eyes were now focused on Jacky.
16.11.2019 06:29
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*mother
16.11.2019 06:32
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Jacky:"Your son if very special...Hes saving your life"
16.11.2019 06:33
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She didn't respond and just kept wheezing.
16.11.2019 06:36
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Jacky:*She put the oxygen mask on the women*
16.11.2019 06:37
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She inhaled deeply and regulated her breathing, clutching onto the mask.
16.11.2019 06:40
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Jacky:"Keep calm"
16.11.2019 06:41
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She coughed a bit and sat up.
16.11.2019 06:43
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Jacky:"Ma'ma are you alright..?"
16.11.2019 06:44
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She nodded, leaning against her bed.
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16.11.2019 06:46
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Jacky:*Horns bursted out of my head and i dashed away*
16.11.2019 06:47
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Elijah looked up confused as she dashed off.
16.11.2019 06:48
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Jacky:"Not right now..."
16.11.2019 06:51
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He looked to his mother and hugged her, who in turn pushed him off.
16.11.2019 06:52
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Jacky:*Stands in his hallway*
16.11.2019 06:56
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He looked down at his lap feeling like did something wrong. He got up and walked out into the hallway.
16.11.2019 06:57
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Jacky:*Falls back* "Dont come near me"
16.11.2019 07:01
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He flinched. "I'm sorry-" He said as quickly went to his room.
16.11.2019 07:05
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Jacky:*Tears roll down my face*
16.11.2019 07:32
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