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08.08.2018 20:14
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I saw someone else doing this. Here i’m looking to criticize animations, more than simply art.
08.08.2018 20:15
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08.08.2018 20:18
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The hair in your art from what i can see is too big. Also, some of your drawings look stiff.
08.08.2018 20:31
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I see. I'll try to work on that.
08.08.2018 20:16
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08.08.2018 20:20
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Your art has captured many things that others tend to mess up on. The hands aren’t too small, the eyes aren’t too big, there isn’t any unnecessary details anywhere. At this point, you seem to be fairly good with anatomy and I think now would be a good time to try a bunch of other styles for a while, might help you improve a whole lot more.
08.08.2018 20:17
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08.08.2018 20:22
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I actually like your art style, it’s simple and pleasing to the eye. However, your lineart needs a lot of work. The animations i’ve seen (not very many) are OK, but very easy and don’t seem to have any extra appeal that you need to capture people’s attention.
08.08.2018 20:22
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Try adding more movement.
08.08.2018 20:17
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08.08.2018 20:26
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Your art needs improvement. The lineart can be very sloppy in your works, the eyes are too big, and you don’t seem to get proportions correct in most of your art. Try using references and sketching more often.
08.08.2018 20:34
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thanks
08.08.2018 20:47
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