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23.11.2018
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23.11.2018 02:18
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Hold your tongue Count to three Never let them see Your emotions underneath Put on smile And act like it’s ok When your secretly Wilting away It’s all fun and games Until someone gets hurt But what if your the only hurt Pain turns into wounds Wounds turn into blood You try to keep your head tight But it just crumbles apart Your heart as fragile as glass Yet the outside as cold as stone The feeling that your never yourself Just as a doll and silicone Smile the pain away And let the tears fall at night But your not ok Your full of fright Fearing your sanity is going away You plead for some relief But no one can hear you because it’s all inside your head Sometimes you think your better off dead
23.11.2018 02:21
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oh snap its gr8 and here is my dark poem XDDDD Music drowns out laughter Laughter drowns out words Words drown out me They clink their glasses Talking in slurred speech We head to the dance floor And I pour another drink.
23.11.2018 02:22
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Glass break Minds shatter But what if that mind can’t be fixed Slowly pondering the darkness that used to be light What left Dust? Shards? Nothing ?
23.11.2018 02:25
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Or is it a lost soul Wondering never to be found Currupted Broken deeper on the inside and perfect on the out Screaming silently Crying dry tears You can’t see them though Because there just in your head
23.11.2018 02:24
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t h a t w a s a m a z i n g i can't write a poem to save my life
23.11.2018 02:25
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I just write poems on the top of my head
23.11.2018 02:28
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w o w you have a real talent. and you're amazing at it.
23.11.2018 02:28
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But it’s to deeepppp
23.11.2018 02:34
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You make me sad, also your poems great, I can't make a poem to save my life, but I can make a song but it won't stay in my head long.
23.11.2018 02:34
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I make songs , and poems
23.11.2018 02:38
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Oof that's great. I normally make songs when I'm sad or frustrated. It makes me calm, but also makes me realize I can't do anything about it except for wait.
23.11.2018 02:39
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btw your poem is 9999/10
23.11.2018 02:39
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I write song and poem s at extremely fast rate I have over 6 original songs that I know of
23.11.2018 02:39
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Aww thank
23.11.2018 02:41
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NP :-D lucky you can remember your stuff
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23.11.2018 02:47
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Lol
23.11.2018 03:52
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I made a song. It's off the top of my head so when I started to get quite I was trying to think of more lyrics. https://www.speakpipe.com/msg/s/130359/1/esd05v6fk7x5ubc2 I'll get the lyrics later.
23.11.2018 04:05
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23.11.2018 04:17
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thank you
23.11.2018 02:56
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This is really good 10/10
23.11.2018 02:59
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