Rate my dark poem

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Undertale15[OP]
23.11.2018 02:18
LinkHold your tongue
Count to three
Never let them see
Your emotions underneath
Put on smile
And act like it’s ok
When your secretly
Wilting away
It’s all fun and games
Until someone gets hurt
But what if your the only hurt
Pain turns into wounds
Wounds turn into blood
You try to keep your head tight
But it just crumbles apart
Your heart as fragile as glass
Yet the outside as cold as stone
The feeling that your never yourself
Just as a doll and silicone
Smile the pain away
And let the tears fall at night
But your not ok
Your full of fright
Fearing your sanity is going away
You plead for some relief
But no one can hear you because
it’s all inside your head
Sometimes you think your better off dead
oh snap its gr8
and here is my dark poem XDDDD
Music drowns out laughter
Laughter drowns out words
Words drown out me
They clink their glasses
Talking in slurred speech
We head to the dance floor
And I pour another drink.
You make me sad, also your poems great, I can't make a poem to save my life, but I can make a song but it won't stay in my head long.
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