hows this (rate from 1-10)
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MorganTheCat 
1191
1191
23.10.2017
13 comments
MorganTheCat[OP]
23.10.2017 05:13
Linkits just a test.
MorganTheCat[OP]
23.10.2017 05:13
Linksoo..
Jordannthedog
23.10.2017 05:13
Link9
MorganTheCat[OP]
23.10.2017 05:15
Linkalso any tips?
8/10 overall
The boobs are really good, correct placement, shape and everything
The forearm is a bit of a wonky shape, try and make it curve in earlier
The shoulders are a nice width
You can see her face through her hair? Other than that, I have no nit picks
Nice job :3
@Thepapersandwich In anime, and many art styles, you can see eyes through hair. XD
I know but, not usually to this extent
An entire eye is behind the hair, it wouldn't be visible in any anime I know of
some people have art styles and the only way you can tell the arts mine is that you can see the eyes or mouth threw the hair. that's why i did that, it just comes normal for me to do that.
and also it's a way for you to see the expression of my characters with hair in there face.
i think color would make it stand out more and it would show you put more effort in it
i would give you a 10/10 if you add color, shading, and movement. that's all it needs