Hmmmm...no.

uh ok, 1: Shading; You never ever shade, and when you do you use black, use dark grays or lighter grays, and add shading layers, 2: arms; you just draw lines straight down and the neck never connects to the shoulders enough, so yeahhh just a though on that 3:....no forehead hair you have no hair on your forehead, everyone does, even if they have a pony tail in, sun has hair tho nice on that