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15.04.2019 05:58
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Stuff i’ve actually put effort in for people to critique:
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it's lit fam
15.04.2019 05:59
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I mean trash broother
15.04.2019 06:00
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15.04.2019 06:11
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no I meant to say broother owo
15.04.2019 07:49
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Hmm I really love the dragon one! It’s really pretty :D However, it could be improved by perhaps making lineless? And slightly larger, so you could shade them to make it really pop. If not then you should make the colour of the line art not black, but like a dark brownish colour. This goes for all your other anims. Outlining in black is totally fine, but it doesn’t always make the final picture look as good as it should be. But it’s ok to use it ofc, just not always. Uhmm for your other anims, the foxy one is amazing, but for the streak one you should shade the shadows more. I see that you have shaded those areas, but I think you should shade it more. Like, make it slightly darker. But don’t overkill it. You should also try cel shading. I personally think your style would look great with cel shading. And that’s all I have! Hope this helped, have a nice day. :)
15.04.2019 07:56
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Thank you! I'll take trying cell shading into mind ^^
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