a Positive critique oh UT1.
by:
KittytheWitch 
1887
1887
18.01.2018
18 comments
EPICNESS
18.01.2018 12:33
Link"positive"?
also, sorry if I "2fast4u" by accident.
KittytheWitch[OP]
18.01.2018 12:35
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EPICNESS
18.01.2018 12:42
Link"Positive"???
So, i know that Fnafsansy is one of your favorite oc's. and that its one of your first ocs... but i feel like you might need some advice on your oc, you dont need to take any of this into account. but, if your reading this. then please, think about it :)
time to start
also before this starts :
this will be in 3 sections so its easier for me to understand ;v;
ok, so first up is the character design.
the character design is cute! i really find it quite creative, but i suggest making the rainbow wings into a "pastel rainbow" instead of a normal rainbow, it would compliment the character's personality. also the hair... skeletons dont HAVE hair, maybe the hair is magic? i dont know, but its cute ^^
now, the personality
now we dont get much of what she's like with her first anim, but if you roleplay with her, you can tell she is some what of a smart, creative, person ( ? ) and i think thats a perfect personality! ^^
and now my least favorite, her powers
in almost all the roleplays i do with her, fnaf sansy has alot of OP powers, Op ( over powered ) ocs are kind of annoying to me, im not saying having 1 over powered power is bad, its ok. But you cant just at one point TURN THE WORLD INTO BATIM
but other then the magic, i think she is an over-all good oc ^^
OP characters really trigger at times
like its alright at first
but they shouldn't be immune and resistant to EVERYTHING
ughhhh when is the contest ready! XDDDDD It feels life forever lol