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The eyes look crooked,you didn't color some spaces, and the lineart looks a bit messy.

I'm fairly local, I've been around I've seen the streets, you're walking down I'm fairly local, good people now Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh I'm evil to the core What I shouldn't do I will They say I'm emotional What I wanna save I'll kill Is that who I truly am? I truly don't have a chance Tomorrow I'll keep a beat And repeat yesterday's dance Yo, this song will never be on the radio Even if my clique were to pick and the people were to vote It's the few, the proud, and the emotional Yo, you, bulletproof in black like a funeral The world around us is burning but we're so cold It's the few, the proud, and the emotional I'm fairly local, I've been around I've seen the streets, you're walking down I'm fairly local, good people now Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh [2x] I'm not evil to the core What I shouldn't do I will fight I know I'm emotional What I wanna save I will try I know who I truly am I truly do have a chance Tomorrow I'llkeep a beat And repeat yesterday's dance Yo, this song

COOL >:D