Okay for this one.... 1. Make the outer lines more equally curved in like a banana 2. For the outer lines, try to keep each line in the actual same placement so we can really see the turn in it. 3. For the winged human, make the wings morph from the sides and not come out, enclose, then fill in 4.You could add a flap into the animation and make the backwards fall smoother 5. Loops look great with everything, so maybe you could make the whole thing a loop