cry for my friend
by:
Afoxgirlgamr 
13
13
23.07.2017
10 comments
plasmabolt
23.07.2017 16:20
LinkHMMM
Alicorn - check
Edgy pony - check
Coloured hair - check
Blood tears (not very mary sueish) - check
Accesories like princess - check
This OC can be described only in TWO words...
Mary sue.
KittytheWitch
23.07.2017 16:44
Linkwell acculy... its not that mary sue to have a alicorn oc. because its alloud if they have done somthing that is WORTHY of becoming a alicorn. if they have done somthing like dat then its not a mary sue
Zee-rex
23.07.2017 16:47
Linkthe spelling in that paragraph was ****ing atrocious
Daisyasdf
23.07.2017 16:48
LinkZee it's only a few words that were misspelled so it's not that bad
Zee-rex
23.07.2017 16:53
Linki know but when people misspell things that badly it just bothers me
KittytheWitch
23.07.2017 16:55
Linklol i meant to spell wrong lol
Daisyasdf
23.07.2017 16:55
Linkoh ok
actually*
allowed*
something*
uh..
that* maybe
fixed it, you're welcome Zee
Its just my opinion,so you dont have to attack me like that,you know you cant change people's opinions,if you didnt mean to change the opinion just forget this...
And alicorn ocs are also used for princess,which makes it kinda a mary sue character,some ofthem aren't that bad.
I didnt mean to hurt her or anything,i just wanted it to point it out,maybe one day she will improve her character
-Nightswhisker
